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In the Midnight Mist

As I was writing this poem, I had my grandson fill in the blank, but Grandma gives… not only did he give me that but the next line which I loved so much I made it my title too. Perhaps, I’m passing down poetry to the next generation. IN THE MIDNIGHT MIST some kids don’t hear morning birds bidding goodbye to the moon at noon they rise for their bacon and pancakes or tacos and burgers bidding goodbye to the morning sun all of out synch pay no attention to the olden days no rise and shine no switch on the back side spoiled and loved and spoiled hopefully their parents whip them into shape with their love…no belly aching after visiting the fortress of solitude dramatic, yes that’s what the eight year old calls his room here in my habitation, but when his brother is here he finds aggravation or vexation from Grandpa but Grandma gives kisses in the midnight mist according to a little birdie who woke up from his nest 7/1/2023

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Date: 7/6/2023 2:40:00 PM
Really cute and I'm liking your style!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2023 7:18:00 PM
Thank youso much, Paige! :)
Date: 7/3/2023 12:40:00 PM
So adorable Kim. I loved this. I'm so happy you are blessed with grands. It makes it so much easier to age I think as they are the future.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2023 2:20:00 PM
Too true! Be blessed, yourself, sweet Nancy! Thank you!
Date: 7/3/2023 12:27:00 PM
- A lovely poem ... you are a wonderful grandmother to your grandchildren, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2023 2:19:00 PM
Hope so! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 7/3/2023 9:58:00 AM
Being amid grandkids is a splendid source of inspiration any time of the day. For they say some of the most adorable things with their innocent, yet intelligent demeanor. Lovely poem, Kim. You are blessed!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2023 10:23:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Yes, grandkids adorable. I am blessed, indeed! Many blessings to you, my friend!
Date: 7/3/2023 9:56:00 AM
So the little birdie is spying on your family. Must sing his melodious song in happiness at what it saw. Exquisite poem. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2023 10:24:00 AM
Love that, dear Victor! Hugs ~ Kim Thank you!

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