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In the Gloaming

The hunter set off just before the gloaming adjusting the straps of his high powered rifle it was a long way to where the stag usually fed a majestic stag sprouting twelve point antlers Climbing high up the rugged mountain side he trekked fast covering the many miles at last he was where the stag usually fed casting around for signs of his tracks Finding them he started stalking his prey up hill and down dale he carefully followed until at last he could see him way up ahead taking care to keep down wind he got close Now about one hundred yards apart, he settled nestling into the thick bracken patiently waiting The stag climbed onto his favourite outlook and stood there poised as the gloaming lit the sky Truly a wondrous sight he was in full prime the hunter sighed as he took steady aim then with a click it was finally time to shoot the stag hearing the sound took to his heels The hunted checked his camera, yes he had him a perfect picture well satisfied he packed up this one picture had taken days of trailing him now he was forever captured in magnificent splendour

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/15/2014 7:52:00 PM
I am so happy with this ending Shadow. I had hoped that was where you were headed.
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Date: 5/15/2014 8:04:00 AM
I could feel the suspense of the cameraman as he stalked his subject..I was hoping that he would get a great shot..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 5/14/2014 3:58:00 PM
Dear Shadow, How glad I was that this hunter was only seeking a photograph. Yes, I enjoy eating venison, but I love even more seeing deer in the wild. Captivating poem with a clever and welcome twist at the end! Carolyn
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Date: 5/14/2014 12:59:00 AM
Nicely done, Shadow. I enjoyed this write, and for the record, I've never been hunting. I can't harm an animal...that's who I am. Kudos...xxx...mel
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Date: 5/13/2014 8:18:00 PM
oh I just LOVE this surprise ending. Wonderful job with this one, and the title is so cool. I did a contest once and In the gloaming was one of the titles poets could choose to use!!!
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