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In the Garden of War

In The Garden of War Satan— Disguised cherub Stole into the garden The hawk Devoured the dove Same wing— Different feathers Are we not Just a variation Same is the saying— Early worms get caught Least sleeping birds arise late May tomorrow dawn Resurrection of the doves May the true cherubs Arise and soar May the wings of hawks Become featherless.

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Date: 10/11/2016 2:13:00 PM
Very pretty, creative and expressive ... CayCay
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Millard Lowe
Date: 10/11/2016 8:44:00 PM
CayCay, thanks for the read and time taken to offer feedback. Much appreciated. Peace and Love, Millard Lowe
Date: 10/11/2016 1:38:00 PM
Nicely done. Such clear and precise images.
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Millard Lowe
Date: 10/11/2016 8:46:00 PM
DM Babbit, many thanks for your feedback. Much appreciated. Peace and Love, Millard Lowe

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