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In the Garden of Eden

In the Garden of Eden, if I were Eve, There’s one thing that you must believe – Although temptation still would call, An apple wouldn’t cause my fall. Yet no one is immune to fate And so I wouldn’t hesitate To violate forbidden code For apple pie – if a la mode!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/16/2015 7:20:00 PM
A delightful read, Ilene. And, I doubt if you would find many who would disagree.
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Date: 1/14/2015 1:23:00 PM
Very clever Ilene:) by-passing laws like that might not go down well with the judge! I too would be tempted...apple pie is one of my favs. All the best. // paul
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