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In the Eyes of Your Love

Beauty is the beast. Wondrous its aroma, that leaves the senses numb. Its desires indecent, its sadness delicious. In the eyes of your love. When in your presence, I am lost. Your delicacy undulating my core, lubricating oneself, swallowing the heart and mind. In the eyes of your love. But when love escapes you, foreboding are the feelings, left the emptiness. Symphony of misery, frightens the air. In the eyes of your love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/19/2008 8:43:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. Please continue with your writing and share it with the world. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/17/2008 9:08:00 AM
I enjoyed this poem. I would like for our editorial board to have the opportunity to consider it for Blue Fog Journal’s “Contemporary Romantic Love Poems” anthology. If you are interested please review the submission guidelines at the following link: http://bluefogjournal.com/call-for-submission/. Sincerely, ED COET Editor, Blue Fog Journal
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Date: 11/12/2008 9:03:00 AM
sorry, check now I added a few if your intrested in reading.
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Date: 11/12/2008 3:34:00 AM
You didn't write anything else silly ;)
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Date: 11/10/2008 2:48:00 PM
OMFG!!! I love it sooo much!! You should read some of my poems. . . Some are like this and some are deep and dark. . .
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