In the Eyes of Love

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Written on February 25, 2024

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Terza Rima Sonnet

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Breaking my heart with quiet smiles, sensations Akin to dewlike joys, blended with chances, Gentle feelings flowing, breathless creations… Welcoming my soul’s doting, as light dances, Whispering across the heart, still - as the light, Reflecting all the grace this love enhances,… Warming every thought with stirrings to excite, Persuading with rhythms of soft, impressive tunes, Blazing wonders beyond words, full of insight… Startling skies awake with a tear who cocoons, Relishing the peace found in those who believe, In my darling’s eyes, love as big as the moons… Found there is love so strong, it will never leave, Glowing earnestly - some might call it naïve.

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Jerry Brotherton

Date: 2/25/2024 6:53:00 PM

A lovely and touching poem, Regina.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2024 5:58:00 PM

I love a good terza rima. Amazing, Gina.

Silent One

Date: 2/25/2024 10:53:00 AM

This is so lovely my friend..

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/25/2024 9:42:00 AM

your soft romance poem touched me. Liked these lines: Startling skies awake with a tear who cocoons, Relishing the peace found in those who believe, In my darling’s eyes, love as big as the moons… You're poetic voice shines through with this one; it was a delight to read. Enjoy your day, hugs, Sara