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In the End

I walk through the forest in the evening mist. The rain gently weeps through the trees. A thousand times I've strode this path, now lost to the falling of the leaves. Yet each step I take is a memory to me, as I walk through the recess of time. Where adrift in this wood I will never be, as I search for my life's paradigm. Yes, the rust on the gate bleeds red again, like your soul as it drained from your veins. It drips from each frozen hinge to the earth, where all it touches it stains. I placed you here on a dark winter night, on your cheek a kiss I gave, and the white of your corpse like the glow of the moon shined bright as you lay in your grave. The vines grow strong in this lonely place, where for years they have hidden my shame. Here I laid you to rest in this horrible way without even knowing your name. Beneath the weeds, beneath the brambles, beneath a single red rose, beneath a cold dark slab you lie, in a place where nobody knows. Where the stone above you lies to all, for it bares another's name, your motionless body your mother expelled and for this she's not to blame. It was another place and another time and no one could know you came. Now my mournful tears drip on your tomb, changing nothing, it's all the same. So rest my sweet little bastard child whose life you could never live, and in the end, I swear to God, to you my soul I will give.
09/25/16 Overgrown With Vines - Poetry Contest A Broken Wings Contest

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Date: 10/13/2016 7:34:00 PM
Glad to finally come here and see you got a win with it. Congratulations, my friend. Hey, why not put up some one liners for me to see from you?
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James Inman
Date: 10/20/2016 9:09:00 AM
Thanks Andrea
Date: 10/10/2016 5:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, James. What a deep, sad, though provoking poem.
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James Inman
Date: 10/10/2016 7:15:00 PM
Thank you Agnes.
Date: 10/9/2016 5:40:00 PM
A poignant write...Congrats on your win
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James Inman
Date: 10/9/2016 6:47:00 PM
Thank you Joseph.
Date: 10/9/2016 3:29:00 PM
James, this poem of yours made me weep, so wonderfully penned, and oh do I like your creative pattern, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest ~
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James Inman
Date: 10/9/2016 6:44:00 PM
BW, a great contest, thank you for hosting it. I really enjoyed writing for it.
Date: 10/9/2016 11:06:00 AM
oh wow! Wonderful work James, I LOVE this so much...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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James Inman
Date: 10/9/2016 12:52:00 PM
Thank you Laura, I really enjoyed yours as well.
Date: 10/9/2016 5:28:00 AM
This is such a well-deserved win. Congrats, James. ;)
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James Inman
Date: 10/9/2016 10:45:00 AM
Thank you Moon Flower.
Date: 10/8/2016 2:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, James, very well done and the trail to the next line very creative. : ) Hugs Eve
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James Inman
Date: 10/8/2016 7:23:00 PM
Thanks MR. It was ruffly meant to give the feeling of a tendril of a vine.
Date: 10/8/2016 2:16:00 PM
Hi James, You have penned a well written piece. I never want to feel the pain of loosing a child. You convey that pain very well. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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James Inman
Date: 10/8/2016 7:20:00 PM
Thank you Alexis,
Date: 10/8/2016 2:50:00 AM
STATING THE LOSS OF A CHILD-?
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James Inman
Date: 10/8/2016 7:18:00 PM
Vicki, yes this is about the loss of a child but also a statement about society and the stigma associated with being an unwed mother. I intentionally left what happened to the child up to the reader whether it was still born, aborted, murdered, etc. This is fictional. Thank you for your comment.
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Vicki Acquah
Date: 10/8/2016 2:51:00 AM
SOUNDS TRAGIC AND REGRETFUL.
Date: 10/5/2016 6:50:00 PM
creative and brilliant James, I love the way you styled this poem. LINDA
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James Inman
Date: 10/5/2016 8:45:00 PM
Hi PD! Nice of you to visit. Thank you for your wonderful comment. I'm happy you liked it.
Date: 10/4/2016 3:23:00 PM
Seeing this one again, it truly is amazing. I wish I had time to look and see if you have anything else recent I have not seen. need to get out the door of this school!!
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James Inman
Date: 10/6/2016 8:21:00 AM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 9/27/2016 3:28:00 PM
ohh yeah, spectacular it is... such wonder in your words, james!...huggs
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James Inman
Date: 10/2/2016 8:41:00 AM
Sorry for the misplaced comment Nette. I find if someone is posting when I reply to a comment, the comment jumps to the post being written even if you can't see it. It's how the code is written. There is a lag in the page refresh, a kind of glitch in the system. Thank you for pointing it out to me and, even more importantly, thank you for your great comment. I always enjoy hearing from you. Thank you again.
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 9/30/2016 12:44:00 PM
this is nette, james...:)
Date: 9/27/2016 3:11:00 PM
oh my goodness. What an amazing write, James. Constance is going to just LOVE this one. I sure hope I can hurry and pull this one off as well as you did. Such a sad story you did!
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James Inman
Date: 10/2/2016 8:33:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, I think BW will appreciate this. Good luck on yours, I can't wait to read it.
Date: 9/27/2016 3:08:00 PM
A beautifully structured, darkly contemplative piece here, James. "Yes, the rust on the gate bleeds red again, like your soul as it drained from your veins."that is stark, but such an intriguing moment in this poem. The vines hiding the shame, and the rain weeping...nature is sorely alive in this, which is a great touch. Excellent take on the contest theme. Always, Laura
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James Inman
Date: 9/27/2016 3:27:00 PM
Thank you Laura, this one turned out to be very different than I originally envisioned it; although, I like the way it turned out.
Date: 9/25/2016 12:57:00 PM
Lovely James...good luck :)-luloo
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James Inman
Date: 9/25/2016 5:48:00 PM
Thank you Laura.
Date: 9/25/2016 12:15:00 PM
WOW I agree with CayCay - you nailed it! Hugs Jan xx
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James Inman
Date: 9/25/2016 12:19:00 PM
Thanks Jan for the sweet comment.
Date: 9/25/2016 10:25:00 AM
There is absolutely no point in me writing for this contest. You certainly just nailed it, and if you don't, you should have. Your poem is beautiful, creative and very emotional, James - you moved me! A winner with me for sure ... CayCay ... 7
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James Inman
Date: 9/25/2016 12:06:00 PM
CayCay, thank you so much for the wonderful words. I hope you do write something for this contest. I would love to read it and you never know what the judges want.

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