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Oh darling I will always bow down kissing your beautiful cheek do place your sweet dainty head to my heart it speaks singing in song listen to the music echoing deeply Fluttering dances honey, do you feel it pulsate as in the deep pumping blood a tune sings Filled red with desires beast gasping upon breaths peeling back the skin it flows warm to the soul Around the body goes your arms sweetly then your mouth and lips taste mines honey Fills inside warm golden whole love burning turf upon the fire Lighting up the flames inside passion licks hotly power held embracing such amazing beauty Tightly grasping your eagle claws holding you such pure divine thoughts Tightly we burn our energies together softly whispers forever a treasure now that we spark from across waters Our distant souls in the flames burn for each other Uniting flickering lashes dance always flirting so very beautiful love Are you baby casting magic spells ore me because its working The heart just keeps beating faster for you honey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/21/2014 12:43:00 PM
She sang in a high pitchrd veveteen voice or in a blissed velveteen voice..Fixing my last soupm ..I sent you a msg here cause soup m is slow nw..I delete it later
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/21/2014 1:37:00 PM
no worries dear pal will get onto it now
Date: 10/5/2014 12:31:00 AM
A true combination of loving, romantic and passionate. I truly enjoyed this write.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/21/2014 1:40:00 PM
sari thank you dear friend so kind of you wonderful comment bless you
Date: 10/3/2014 5:51:00 PM
I think that her spell is working on you! These beautiful words are so filled with passion. A very enchanting write, Liam!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/3/2014 6:33:00 PM
she sure casts a deep spell kelly thank you so much dear friend heart touching beautiful comment truly appreciated god bless you
Date: 10/2/2014 7:10:00 PM
well that really does have some heat to it! ;) Lucky Lady! Light & Love
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/2/2014 7:22:00 PM
so very kind debbie thank you deeply for the truly beautiful comment god bless
Date: 10/2/2014 5:11:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your romantic lines today..I am glad that I chose this one to read..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/2/2014 7:07:00 PM
sara dear friend thank you kindly for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 10/2/2014 2:48:00 PM
I do love the passion. You captured that and your desire and willingness to worship her...excellent...Tim
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/2/2014 3:01:00 PM
that is tim what a good woman does to a man thank you deeply tim truly wonderful comment dear friend
Date: 10/2/2014 1:48:00 PM
Very beautifully penned Liam. A joy to read.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/2/2014 1:56:00 PM
ah thank you so kindly dear pal hope all's well with you
Date: 10/2/2014 10:46:00 AM
The passion is palpable, Liam...One of your best. Lovely
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/2/2014 11:08:00 AM
thank you deeply for the kind and very beautiful comment eileen heartfelt appreciated dear friend
Date: 10/2/2014 9:29:00 AM
Excellent write, Liam, coming from the depth of your heart. Hot passion and desires merge together in a song of love. // paul
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/2/2014 10:00:00 AM
thank you paul dear friend truly wonderful comment ever so deeply appreciated
Date: 10/2/2014 8:32:00 AM
This is packed with emotions and passion.Yes,so beautiful it is and as sweet as honey.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/2/2014 8:51:00 AM
i have been working on this piece for quite a while smiling dear friend thank you kindly you just cheered me up wonderful comment charmaine heartfelt appreciated pal

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