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In The End

My body is placed on the pyre
Releasing my soul to the wind
Sacrificed unto the fire
That's where my next life begins

I soar up into the heavens
Like the smoke that rises above
My wings are that of the Phoenix
My soul is that of a dove

I don't feel the pain of my sorrow
In fact, I'm feeling relieved
No-one could ever imagine
The joy that I have received

You can cry your tears of rememberance
But keep persuing your dreams
We'll meet again at your hour
Where the willow touches the stream

Rockman   :-)

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  1. Date: 10/22/2013 5:44:00 PM
    Just a comment about your comment below. Sometimes I write the last line of a poem before I ever find verses to fit. Apparently I'm fine with endings. I enjoyed this very unique expression

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 10:01:00 AM
    I enjoyed this beautiful verse from beginning to end. A sweet sadness. Cynthia

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 8:16:00 PM
    I like this alot good vibes on this write Thank you for the jounery,

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 10:52:00 AM
    this is beautifully written, especially the last two lines - great!

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    Date: 1/28/2013 12:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Ilene. I wrote this poem but never finished it because I couldn't come up with an end. My notebook laid at my feet for about 4 or 5 days while I typed on the computer. I kept glancing at it wondering how to end it. Then in a flash it came to me. I wonder if you and other writers go through that. Thanks for reading. Rockman
  1. Date: 1/28/2013 7:25:00 AM
    A very touching and well written poem, Rockman. - Have a nice new week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)