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In the Distant Beauty of Another Place

In The Distant Beauty of Another Place Four strings, smooth hand oiled skin, imbued with joy’s countless hours. A friend to one so lonely, a voice to her silent awakening heart each movement a dance in the distant beauty of another place. Her rosined bow coaxing sweetness from the inanimate wood and string, subtle hands speaking of her dreams, her fears, her desire to be free – As free as the haunting vibrations emanating through her being – awakening the fervor of her love arousing the awareness of her passion. Old strings embraced by young hands renewed by love’s request, responding to the sensuous touch of beauty’s siren song. Dimmed lights, hushed crowd, four strings dance with rosined bow, soft tears speaking through varnished wood in the distant beauty of another place. John G. Lawless 12/20/2014 submitted to – Let The Music Play On – poetry contest sponsor – Mystic Rose

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Date: 1/5/2015 9:07:00 PM
Lovely, John...congrats on your win! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 1/2/2015 11:05:00 PM
John, Congratulations!!! A sweet "Let The Music Play On, WIN." Love Linda
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Date: 1/2/2015 3:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, John. Wonderful imagery and feelings. Best wishes for the new year. Sandra
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Date: 1/2/2015 2:38:00 AM
Great work here,congrats on the John...huggs
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Date: 1/1/2015 8:21:00 PM
Jphn,beautiful write, congratulations on your win. Blessings to you for the coming year
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Date: 1/1/2015 7:18:00 PM
Such incredible imagery this was sweet music to my heart to read - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx - its a 7 from me
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John Lawless
Date: 1/1/2015 7:24:00 PM
Thanks Jan for your kind words and high praise.

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