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In the Desert

Endlessly the golden red tinged sands roll on, vast dunes tower with narrow gully's betwixt them. Cast in purple and black shadows harbouring an oasis. Dotted with swaying palms and colourful birds singing and blue waters that entice as they shimmer and sparkle. Here, hidden in the dunes folds, a priceless peace reigns. A place that holds a treasure not governed by gems or gold. Here tucked away everyday values no longer are important. Tranquillity blows in on hot winds that ripple the surfaces of sand whipping it into mini swirls that dance away. Shadow Hamilton written 09/16/2014 contest: IN THE DESERT sponsor Nette

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Date: 4/24/2015 3:14:00 PM
Great and impressive
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/26/2015 5:28:00 PM
ty Afolabi hugs
Date: 9/22/2014 7:40:00 AM
loved your desert and oasis. Grats on your contest placing. Hugs xx
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Date: 9/21/2014 3:52:00 PM
wonderful imagery Shadow many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/21/2014 12:06:00 PM
- Congratulations Shadow ! - I share 7th place with pride, with you :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/21/2014 2:04:00 AM
Shadow. I am glad that you are on the list. Congratulations to you, sweetie.
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Date: 9/21/2014 12:17:00 AM
Wonder imagery Shadow! Very expressive n impressive! Congrats dear!
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Date: 9/20/2014 8:09:00 PM
Just came back to congratulate you on your win Shadow.
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Date: 9/20/2014 3:37:00 PM
light-hearted read so finely addressed, shadow.. proud to have this in my contest... congrats and huggs
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Date: 9/20/2014 5:43:00 AM
A pleasurable read about oasis in the desert, Shadow. congrats on the win
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Date: 9/18/2014 11:14:00 PM
This is so beautiful, it makes us thirst for more!!!! Great poem Shadow!!!
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Date: 9/18/2014 9:54:00 PM
you really went to town with your desert poem. It's so cool to see where people took their topic!! Love how you ended it with sand whipping it into mini swirls that dance away!!
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Date: 9/17/2014 10:44:00 AM
Very beautiful picture here Shadow. Good luck.
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Date: 9/16/2014 5:37:00 PM
Wow, Shadow, your words add dimension and meaning to Isaiah's pictures. Good Luck with the contest.
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Date: 9/16/2014 6:37:00 AM
- A beautiful oasis in your desert - Lovely written, Shadow - Good luck in the contest! - Have a nice day :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/15/2014 10:51:00 PM
What a beautiful poem. How unique to actually write about the desert for the desert contest. I have read quite a few that only use the word "desert" figuratively. I hope this has a high ranking in the contest.
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