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In the Desert

In The Desert In the desert walks a man with no name within its barren sands he seeks no fame Survival is his only wish and only game all burns, sticks or crawls nothing is tame The rattlesnakes strike with poison gifts nothing soothes, quenches or uplifts A heat that singes as it burns on down Rarely, if ever relief from a cloudy gown Yes, O' yes, beauty does still hide here found only if he can conquer his great fear! note: Fear of the danger a desert presents often clouds the beauty lying within. A proper emergency plan is a must when entering a desert. Food, water and a compass are just the basic start.. Robert J. Lindley, Contest- In The Desert , 09-14-2014

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Date: 10/14/2014 2:16:00 PM
Great advice in this poem of common sense when entering such a doorway of nature. Fine piece Robert, well done, James :)
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Date: 9/25/2014 1:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, Robert! Yes, I agree with you; were it not for fear a desert has a beauty of its own to offer. The scouts' motto "Be prepared" is one that must be heeded. Enjoyed this write, my friend. // paul
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Date: 9/22/2014 6:47:00 AM
I like it! It reads so smooth and warns of the dangers, but upon danger lies beauty. well done with your winning poem :)
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Date: 9/21/2014 8:23:00 PM
Congrats Robert...I like your original take on this
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Date: 9/21/2014 3:48:00 PM
wonderful description and imagery many congrats on your win Robert:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/21/2014 1:52:00 PM
Thanks for all the comments and the congrats.. The inspiration to write was the reward. Three times is a charm my friend .... TY..
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Date: 9/21/2014 12:26:00 PM
- Just came back to congratulate you on your win Robert - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/21/2014 2:01:00 AM
I'm back a third time to wish you a BIG congratulations this time.
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Date: 9/21/2014 12:27:00 AM
Wow that's a real one Robert! Beautifully rhyming desert! Congrats on ur win!
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Date: 9/20/2014 8:58:00 PM
Loved it Robert well done
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Date: 9/20/2014 3:12:00 PM
eerily delightful, robert...proud to have this in my contest... congrats and huggs
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Date: 9/20/2014 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Robert.
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Date: 9/20/2014 5:33:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Robert
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Date: 9/18/2014 10:10:00 PM
Hey, that is very nicely done. How ever will she judge this one??
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Date: 9/18/2014 9:49:00 AM
I like the way you can see beauty in barren places. The closest I have been to a desert is the edge of the red desert in Wyoming and I didn't venture far but was struck by the sparse beauty of it.
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Date: 9/15/2014 10:51:00 PM
Robert, I sure hope I have all those three things on me if I am ever stuck in a desert. But with my luck, I'd be tossed out there by bad guys without even a bottle of water!! Good job for the contest.
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Date: 9/15/2014 11:07:00 AM
- Robert, I like your suggestion for this contest - Lovely written ! - (I just posted one :) - Good luck in the contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/15/2014 10:15:00 AM
Very captivating and interesting write on desert and in the desert, Robert
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Date: 9/14/2014 10:54:00 PM
Yes, a stark and dangerous beauty. Very nice poem .BG
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Date: 9/14/2014 7:55:00 PM
Great message here, Robert. Thank you for sharing it. Hope you and family are doing well, my friend. Thanks for the visit. Always,Annalise
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