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in the deep

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in the deep

touching heartbeats
running deep
two hearts
began beating
as one
love alone
you touch
my feelings

if i were 
to die
please leave
my body be
heartbreaking within
to see
yet not being able
to wipe away
loves teardrops

falling hurt
consumed emotion
in the other piece
of ones heart
touched in 
the deepest
part of heaven

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  1. Date: 10/4/2013 12:27:00 AM
    You incorporate words in such a lovely way. I really enjoyed reading this poem of yours. Keep up the fantastic work. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 10:07:00 PM
    You have deep emotions that you show in your poetry. Very nice.

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 3:56:00 PM
    Hey Liam, Wonderful write buddy. Ken