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In the Deep

touching heartbeats running deep two hearts began beating as one love alone you touch my feelings if i were to die please leave my body be heartbreaking within to see yet not being able to wipe away loves teardrops falling hurt consumed emotion in the other piece of ones heart touched in the deepest part of heaven

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/4/2013 12:27:00 AM
You incorporate words in such a lovely way. I really enjoyed reading this poem of yours. Keep up the fantastic work. Always, Laura
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Date: 10/3/2013 10:07:00 PM
You have deep emotions that you show in your poetry. Very nice.
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Date: 10/3/2013 3:56:00 PM
Hey Liam, Wonderful write buddy. Ken
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