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In the Darkness of Your Night

Lands full of fragrant flowers flow across an unfound field where once nature was abundant and the sun was bright and clear In the darkness of your night where skies are harsh and grey knocks heard upon your window but you turn and run in fear Fear not knowing the unknown for that is where the light shall lay trust those that surround you and let your darkness disappear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/13/2016 10:53:00 AM
This poem ends with a wonderful note of optimism. Good writing, Tim.
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Date: 9/11/2016 7:53:00 PM
this is really nice, Tim. I enjoyed the metaphor of field of flowers for when things were happier. By the way, typo in your title.
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Date: 9/11/2016 12:01:00 AM
You had me thinking..."yikes..what's next"! Very nice!
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Date: 9/10/2016 8:53:00 AM
What an uplifting piece. I like the foreboding feel of this piece combined with the positive message.
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Date: 9/9/2016 8:45:00 PM
Full of melancholy, hope and sadness all in one!
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Date: 9/9/2016 8:29:00 PM
nicely done tim :)
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Date: 9/9/2016 7:45:00 PM
:) Takes so long to build up trust in someone. Sometimes it is so easily destroyed. Lovely reminder to not let past experiences hinder one from trusting again.
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Date: 9/9/2016 5:13:00 PM
I ain't skeered of no dark! Lol You do however make a good point, Tim Knowledge conquers fears.
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Date: 9/9/2016 4:24:00 PM
Great message Tim!
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Date: 9/9/2016 3:48:00 PM
Loved this poem Tim- Fear not knowing the unknown...Its a statement on its own...Awesome.
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