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In the Dark

The sight of the evening sun disappearing when the day is done The darkness of night falls around me My skin drinks the mist from the cold rough waves of the sea In the dark I am swallowed by mystery I am not where I want to be It feels as though I can't breathe In the dark

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/26/2010 4:56:00 AM
I know exactly how you feel when I fal in to darkness i feel traped. Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 7/23/2010 12:00:00 PM
Darkness is for some an asylum of security, dreams are a mere reflection... And the light brings hope for some... Like you're writing... Take care Gary
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Date: 7/23/2010 9:48:00 AM
nice one, enjoyed
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