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In the Corners

When the lights dim I will drift into your dreams lightly touching you Small whispers breathing in the corners of your soul bringing images A slideshow of us with a faded yesterday memories not lost

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/9/2012 9:41:00 AM
You're such a romantic..another beautiful piece.I like the layout of the poem..Hugs, Holly
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Date: 11/19/2012 7:47:00 AM
Fine bittersweet work here! Keep 'em coming! Peace & blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/16/2012 2:19:00 PM
like these, Michael, love the profoundness...
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Date: 11/13/2012 5:48:00 PM
FEELING EVERY SET AND LINE OF EMOTIONAL BLISS OF YESTERDAY'S DREAMS MICHAEL LUV .. U PRESENT A PICTURE OF SOFT ECSTASY WITH CHARMING NOSTALGIA ,, OH I AM THERE .. JG FEELING IT ALL ..XOXO
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Date: 11/12/2012 8:35:00 PM
This is an amazing write, Michael. I love every single line, which is rare. Officially "faved" :)
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Date: 11/12/2012 7:18:00 PM
love the way you set this one up...great images in this piece as well...romantic poem for sure! Hugs
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Date: 11/12/2012 6:01:00 PM
So romantic and I enjoyed the page layout too! Thanks for stopping by my writes! Light & Love
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Date: 11/12/2012 4:49:00 PM
a beautifully gentle, romantic senryu set you have here, michael, I especially like 1 and 3 :-)
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Date: 11/12/2012 4:34:00 PM
well penned Michael... thanks for stopping by.......
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Date: 11/12/2012 3:26:00 PM
In the Corners is such a lovely title for this set of romantic haiku, Michael. Very very nice.
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Date: 11/12/2012 10:52:00 AM
This is truly amazing, what tenderness you exude within this powerful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly terrific and blazingly wonderful poem this afternoon! What a delightful and heartfelt piece you have written Michael, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/12/2012 9:23:00 AM
SUPER WOW AND SO SWEET!! EXCELLENT SENRYUS MICHAEL! I love THEM ALL! A winner for sure! Thank you so much for stopping by and your very inspiring comments! I wish you all the best! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 11/12/2012 8:34:00 AM
This is an amazing write from you Michael.Enjoyed very much.
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