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In The Bucket

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In The Bucket

Written March 21, 2013


Feel the slim slow slider
The leather seat behind her
Where the innocent crack
And the kids keep coming back
For flashing lights and heart attacks

Feel the slim slow slider
In the midnight rider
Where the loveless greet with fleeting feet
Say come on down and take a seat
Beside the boy who smells so sweet

Oh slim slow slider
Hear the echo of the fire
That forever burns inside her
Cracklin' songs as embers fall
You would have thought they had it all

Feel the slim slow slider
Remove material attire
Smooth hands caress what I possess
Ain't no better way to de-stress
Than in the bucket under duress

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  1. Date: 5/16/2013 12:27:00 PM
    Well-- great write with an obvious seductive undertone... nicely disguised with ambiguity.

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    Date: 5/16/2013 2:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you I appreciate you taking the time to comment on it and I'm really glad you liked it!