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In the Bottle

exilir, space, air, bottle always remains full; never find empty! Syllable count: 5/7/5

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/29/2014 6:51:00 PM
Mohan, so reviving... Love it...Linda
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Date: 7/23/2014 7:22:00 PM
For some emptiness can be found in a bottle. Very interesting take on the theme, it should do well.
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/23/2014 8:40:00 PM
thanks John
Date: 7/23/2014 12:24:00 PM
Hi, this is very clever! True, a bottle is and can never be empty. I like it. :)
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/23/2014 8:41:00 PM
Thanks for liking it. Mohan

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