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Having experienced a clinical death, made aware of the peace and serenity of eternity was a gift.  Being brought back to life was also a gift; a new chance to live life more completely!

 

With their last goodbyes, they walked away Disappearing in the early morning light Glaring, the pedantic clock leads the way Warm, wrapped in a gauzy cocoon, tight Blissfully euphoric, sedated, waning sight Whizzing on a gurney, through silent halls Wide-eyed doors open to a curious fishbowl of faces Swimming in a sea of floating green tiled walls My consciousness, serenely traveling into nameless spaces Buoyantly riding in a tunnel of luminous cloudy embraces Peace and tranquility arrested the restless soul in me Immersed in the warmth and gift from above In a blinding light, he stepped forward, so I could see … My time had not yet come; these words, He spoke with love Returning me on the wings of a mourning dove Faded voices, I could hear The haunting cries of babies born today My eyes filled with regretful tears Life on Earth I must live, vowing not to stray Until my work is done and He calls me home to stay. Date: April 29, 2022 For: Near Death Experience Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke Placed 6th in contest

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Date: 5/9/2022 4:43:00 AM
Wow! So beautiful! God is so merciful. Congratulations on your win my dear friend Paullete! Thanks for sharing. Hugs
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/9/2022 8:41:00 AM
Hi Len, glad you enjoyed this~and yes God is merciful! :)Paulette
Date: 5/8/2022 4:09:00 PM
Magnificent penning, Paulette, as you've captured the theme exquisitely, and with my compliments dear friend, Aloha~William
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/9/2022 8:42:00 AM
William, thank you so much for your complimentary comment... I appreciate you stopping by. :)Paulette
Date: 5/8/2022 9:00:00 AM
Your poem is very beautiful, Paulette. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/8/2022 3:28:00 PM
Thank you Ann~I appreciate your stopping by to comment. :)Paulette
Date: 5/8/2022 7:57:00 AM
Very deserving, my friend!
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Date: 5/8/2022 8:34:00 AM
Thank you Barbara~Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette
Date: 5/7/2022 10:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Paulette. Your poem is so well written and you really deserve it. Blessings
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/8/2022 8:35:00 AM
Thank you~as always I appreciate your stopping by to comment. Blessings, Paulette
Date: 5/7/2022 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a write/story. God knows best. Your time was not up. Have a great/blessed weekend...................
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Date: 5/7/2022 9:28:00 AM
Thank you Paula, and congratulations to you also for your winning entry too. :)Paulette
Date: 5/4/2022 9:29:00 AM
Felt every line, Paulette, gripping...good work!
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Date: 5/4/2022 9:55:00 AM
Hi Jim, Thanks for stopping by~"gripping" yes, but peaceful experience. :)Paulette
Date: 5/3/2022 6:18:00 PM
Paulette, you've written a wonderful poem, full of meaningful insights, however, I hope this was not your actual situation, but rather a fictional one for the contest's sake. God is kind, and all we have to do is ask and we will be granted.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/4/2022 9:54:00 AM
Laashad thank you for stopping by to comment, I always value your comments. The insights of my poem do come from my personal experience. But, as you see all is well. :)Paulette
Date: 4/30/2022 3:00:00 PM
Great entry for the contest, Paulette. I hope this wasn't your personal experience. If it was, I glad you returned. Your words and thoughts through your poetry have helped many, I'm but one of them. Blessings my friend, Bill
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Date: 5/4/2022 9:53:00 AM
Dear Bill, thank you for your kind comments, especially to know that I might have helped others....you have made my day. P.S. yes, this was a personal experience~and yes, I too, am glad I returned even though it was the most peaceful moment in my life. (lol death) :)Paulette
Date: 4/30/2022 1:41:00 AM
God is compassionate. Ask and you shall receive. I need prayers this coming week.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 4/30/2022 11:45:00 AM
Hi Victor, sounds to me as though you are experiencing difficulties, I will keep you in my prayers. God Bless, Paulette
Date: 4/29/2022 8:36:00 PM
Oh my goodness, this is awesome, it is such a blessed beautiful testimony. Thank you so much for sharing this! God bless you :) I'm so glad He spared you, and you were able to share this wonderful message! <3 ~BJ (FAVE!!!)
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Date: 4/30/2022 11:44:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by to comment BJ. I am glad you found this poem to be enlightening~I had a little trepidation while writing it~not sure how others would receive it. Thanks so much for your reassuring comment. :)Paulette
Date: 4/29/2022 3:23:00 PM
Wow, this is an excellent poem and powerful. I had an experience like this after being hospitalized with covid. It really hit home for me. Well done :)
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 4/30/2022 11:42:00 AM
Hi Heidi, I am glad your experience, like mine has given you a new understanding of life and eternity. Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette

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