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In the Air

First time I met you, my soul began to cry Beautiful lady, beautifully shy, only I In this air I began to stare with care The cry from my soul feeling whole Like a flower in the morning sun Opening vulnerable colorful soft Wanting sharing caring nectar Princess bumble bee take me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/8/2018 11:42:00 AM
Your poem is so deliciously flavored with tender and heartfelt emotions that I can feel. Pure and soulful, Niall. Excellent write!
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/8/2018 3:46:00 PM
Hi Susan, many thanks my friend , I am learning from best here at soup ::)))Hugs~~~Niall
Date: 3/30/2018 11:07:00 PM
Darling ink Niall <3
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Niall Fulham
Date: 3/31/2018 11:43:00 AM
Hi Maureen , thank you for comment ::))) Hugs~~~Niall
Date: 3/30/2018 8:23:00 AM
- Lovely poem Niall ... love in the air .... spring delicious scent of L-O-V-E :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 3/30/2018 9:24:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise , thanks ,,,lol yes spring was in my mind :::))) Hugs~~~Niall
Date: 3/29/2018 10:21:00 PM
Sweet, Niall.
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Niall Fulham
Date: 3/30/2018 1:53:00 AM
Hi Line , thank you for comment ::)) Hugs~~~~Niall
Date: 3/29/2018 9:25:00 PM
I really felt your words, well written ! Love & smiles :)--Sakshi
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Niall Fulham
Date: 3/30/2018 1:51:00 AM
Hi Sakshi , thank you for comment :) glad you enjoyed my friend ::)))HUgs ~~Niall

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