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In the Ageless Eyes

If all the world could see inside What wrinkled covers have denied The storied life of one’s caress For life and love and happiness The inner glow remains intact It’s just the outside that’s been cracked If only they would realize The key is in the ageless eyes if not the world but one or three Who’d care to see what’s really me And not a ghost of supple skin Not just the wrapping I am in Why must they underestimate Or misconstrue or underrate The value of an older work Dismissing with a scornful smirk Ironic as each page is turned In every life as we have learned The same place we shall all arrive So grateful just to be alive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 7/1/2023 9:17:00 PM
Perfect penning, Mike. A neat, poetic analysis of the 'human condition.' 'Twill ever be so, I imagine. Life is a big 'cover-up,' it seems. ~ The U.N. Rapper
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/2/2023 7:20:00 AM
Thank you so much U.N. Rapper!!!
Date: 6/30/2023 10:16:00 AM
- So true ... the inside is as before .... "It’s just the outside that’s been cracked " - Lovely poem, Mike :) - Have a nice weekend :) - hugs
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/1/2023 4:24:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise xxoo
Date: 6/30/2023 9:10:00 AM
Deep thought, Mike. A poem that is not only brilliant but also creative.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/30/2023 10:09:00 AM
Thank you Victor!

Book: Shattered Sighs