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In the Seventies

I wore popular shin high white boots, The top in rage of disco dancing queens. The Bee Gees were the utmost in the clan The alter of quantifying demeans. Revolutionary, the stance we took, The freedom of iconoclastic paths To justify rebellious avenues That swayed the truth in plain objective wraths. Our music was the strength we built upon. To satiate an inward longing for An understanding from our wings of youth To dwell upon that which we needed more; Our voices to be heard above the din Of righteous antiquated old ideals To sway the right of multi-media Into the light of deference that’s real. To end the Viet Nam war was a quest Of Yuppies and of Hippies, both agreed, A war of no beginnings or endings Should dissolve hate for races to succeed. A bracelet worn to honor POW's Those lost in war whose bodies never found, Embraced the sorrows that remain today Of those lost souls sore buried in the ground. The seventies are burnt upon my mind. In vivid dreams of nonconformist ways. I dwell upon the heroes giving grace To rectify the military maze. 3-1-18 I absolutely could not pare this down to the required 20 lines for the contest, so it cannot be an entry.

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Date: 4/13/2018 8:00:00 PM
You summed up the 70s brilliantly in this masterpiece, Connie - my kind of poetry. I hope your 'puter problems are being worked out. Glad you enjoyed Mr Hugabar and thx for your kind comment - Bob H
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Date: 3/27/2018 11:13:00 AM
Oh, dear lord, there should have been an exception for this one, as it is superb and encapsulates the decade perfectly! (You must be about my age?) The 70's were so turbulent for me, and while it was certainly the most difficult decade for me, most of my best memories are from those years. This is fantastic, and it is going into my favs as well. Consider this a vote for first place, please, as it is the best I've read! Blessings, Dear friend! :-) <3
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/29/2018 8:14:00 PM
Thank you very much Greg. It means a lot to me that you think so highly of this poem. I can no longer participate at PS. I can only use my Kindle which worked fine here for years until they got the ads. I have tried everything but can't read poems, comment or see anything. I will miss everyone here so much. I am using my daughter's computer to post this. I wish they would do away with the ads as I know it is affecting many here. Thank you my friend. Aloha, Connie xxoo
Date: 3/22/2018 10:27:00 AM
I am late to the party of those reading your 70's poem, but was wearing the white boots, and feeling the years roll backwards in time. I have kept through the years, in my jewelry box, the POW bracelet that I also have, (His name ...Charles Rice). Years after the war, I found his name on a list of prisoners....and was so pleased to know her came home alive. It was if all my prayers were answered. Thank you for the memories, Connie :)
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Date: 4/12/2018 2:15:00 PM
A real late reply to your lovely comment Carrie because of my problem not being able to read or post, I am so behind. I saved my bracelet for a long time but can no longer find it. I never found out if my POW was ever found but I did pray for him a lot. Those were turbulent times.Thank you :)
Date: 3/13/2018 5:00:00 PM
Connie, I agree with the others that it was a shame you couldn't enter your poem, which so wonderfully presented that era so well. Very well-written and such a memory booster for those who shared those years! A fave for me! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/7/2018 7:01:00 AM
Hi Connie, it is a pity you couldn't put this one in the contest for it is an excellent write of memories of the decade. I remember very little of the seventies but then something can happen and the memories flood back. Thoughts held within silver threads of memory always ready to sing. This one goes into my faves. Have a wonderful wednesday Connie. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 3/4/2018 1:49:00 PM
A reminder of those bracelets from yesteryear’s war! We all want peace!
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Date: 3/4/2018 4:45:00 AM
Indeed, how to do the 70s in 20 lines! Glad I read that or I would have overflowed. Was surprised by the disco thing, to me that was late 70s, but it is very much a part of the decade, its just that I go straight to rock n roll. You did a very good job on a decade that you and I could probably write about over and over without repeating a thing, it was that jam packed. I enjoyed this walk with u thru that decade. Miss you ... CayCay
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Date: 3/3/2018 2:42:00 AM
brilliant, Connie. Sometimes poems should be left as is, as is this one. Never mind the contest, a worthy standalone piece, and a worthy testament. And I bet you were the best dressed protester x
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Date: 3/3/2018 2:13:00 AM
Nicely done my dear Connie. I remember it so well...
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Date: 3/1/2018 8:22:00 PM
Oh Connie. It really inspired you. So sad you can't use it!! I should have done a much better poem than I wrote myself. But etheree are just so convenient sometimes! This is awesome to write about the doings of your generation. I was a kid when the hippie movement started so I never really got into that "mode" of thinking. I bet you were right in the thick of it. Just how rebellious WERE you?? (did yu try the brownies then? haha, remember our email?)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/2/2018 2:42:00 AM
Thank you Andrea I will just write you email. I think I was half-and-half. Half Yuppie and half Hippie. : )
Date: 3/1/2018 11:20:00 AM
Great recollection of the 70s for you...
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Date: 3/1/2018 8:23:00 AM
Brilliantly penned Connie, much precious s a memories and a tribute to those who fell in the war :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/1/2018 7:16:00 AM
Kudos to you for not sacrificing your content due to line limitations. Your poem flows in your usual graceful style. It was not our best decade in some ways..but the war ended..veterans suffered even after coming home. As you said.. the music was a relief. Memories well captured, Connie.
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Date: 3/1/2018 4:06:00 AM
There's so much that remains embedded in me, especially from the late 70's...I read your poem clearly...All the best Connie
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