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Somebody who wishes to be anonymous created the recitation of my poem for me. It was so nice of him. He used a voice changer device and gave my poem great dark atmosphere!!

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In forest's night, the trees bend low beneath a slice of half moon’s glow; silent shadows waver there, chilled by gusts of autumn air. Quavering, as if afraid, they fall on stumps from trees decayed. Among those stumps the shadows creep and shroud a form that seems asleep. Lightning flashes . . . Thunder peals. A sight forlorn the light reveals - a man, quite dead, in woolen coat, with scarf of death left on his throat. The shadows saw, and now they quake, lone witnesses in murder’s wake. They cannot speak, but if they could, they’d tell all travelers of the wood: "We’re not the foe. It’s one of you that makes us tremble as we do. Although we loom and cause you fear, something worse is lurking here." Then Thunder echoes in accord as from the sky, cold rain is poured. And silent shadows start to shrink into a night of blackened ink.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/24/2024 1:47:00 PM
This is just gorgeous, Andrea. It should be entered in a national contest. I'm sure it would win! Very spooky yet beautiful. Congratulations on First place!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/24/2024 10:06:00 PM
Thanks, I entered it years ago in one of Shadowpoetry's annual contests. I think it got a cash win!
Date: 4/24/2024 9:42:00 AM
Dear Andrea, many congratulations on your very worthy top win with this very dark, eerie and atmospheric read. I listened to the narration and I agree, reminded me of Poe. This is great storytelling. I read it aloud several times - one of your best. I love,’ beneath a slice of half moon’s glow’ ‘ into a night of blackened ink’. It’s a very captivating read with vivid imagery. It’s inspired me to write another darker one soon and I’m glad I had the chance to read it. Well done! Celebratory hugs x
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/24/2024 12:56:00 PM
thanks so much
Date: 4/23/2024 8:08:00 PM
Your storytelling prowess is truly remarkable. From the very first line to the last, I was utterly captivated, drawn into a world of dark enchantment and gothic intrigue. Your immersive tone and dramatic imagery transported me to another realm, while your impeccable meter and flow kept me entranced throughout. This scintillating tale is undoubtedly worthy of the highest acclaim and reward. Well done, indeed.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/23/2024 10:40:00 PM
Thanks so much, Edward
Date: 4/23/2024 6:04:00 AM
Wonderful artistic story telling in perfect iambic tetrameter - bravo!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/23/2024 1:17:00 PM
thanks, Craig
Date: 4/23/2024 2:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved to spot
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/23/2024 1:17:00 PM
thanks, Terry.
Date: 4/23/2024 12:53:00 AM
Wow! Speechless this is impeccable sweet Andrea! Congratulations on your win! The meter the cadence the depth and wordplay here is absolutely brilliant! A fave for me
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/23/2024 1:18:00 PM
thanks, much appreciated, Ink. Did you hear the recording of this. The guy reciting my poem reminds of Vincent Price in an Edgar Allen Poe story!!
Date: 4/22/2024 7:41:00 PM
Truly excellent~~a huge CONGRATS on your well-deserved top win, Andrea! Janice
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/22/2024 10:53:00 PM
Thanks so much, Janice
Date: 4/22/2024 3:26:00 PM
Read it, and it was amazing, then listened to it and it gave me shivers. Brilliance Andrea. Probably the most entertaining work there ever has been on Soup. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Congrats on a well deserved win. Pity it wasn't a trophy contest- it deserved one. ( really gave me a scare when I looked down & saw Milt had commented- Then I realized that you had posted it before) .
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Date: 4/22/2024 7:17:00 PM
I am so glad you were able to showcase it again for those like me that had never seen it Andrea, it is truly world class my friend.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/22/2024 6:49:00 PM
thanks so much, dear. Yeah, it would have been amazing to get a trophy. this is one of my personal favorites I ever wrote.
Date: 4/22/2024 2:07:00 PM
Congratulations. Loved this!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/22/2024 6:49:00 PM
thanks, Karen.
Date: 11/24/2020 9:57:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your 1st place win. So well deserved. All the best ~ Warren
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Date: 11/23/2020 3:39:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your great win in the contest with this wonderful write _Constance
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Date: 11/22/2020 9:44:00 PM
CONGRATS to usual Topper.
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Date: 11/22/2020 8:21:00 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win with this scary tale!
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Date: 11/22/2020 6:57:00 PM
Haunting tale well told. A tight rhyme of couplets with a clever close. Congratulations on your top placement. Well deserved.
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Date: 11/22/2020 3:37:00 PM
A fave from top to bottom! Congratulations, Andrea!
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Date: 11/22/2020 2:41:00 PM
Oh, wow..Congratulations dear Andrea for your awesome BIG WIN!!!!! Excellent piece!
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Date: 11/22/2020 2:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem, the woods can be so beautiful by day, and completely terrifying by night. :-)
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Date: 11/22/2020 12:12:00 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Andrea. Superb!! Janice
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Date: 11/22/2020 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea. Your poem is well-written, full of powerful images, and brings back many scenes from my past! Good writing. Keep it up!
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Date: 11/22/2020 8:49:00 AM
One of your classics Andrea and a fave of mine...Congrats on your win..
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Date: 11/22/2020 8:11:00 AM
A dark story beautifully penned Andrea. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 11/22/2020 6:53:00 AM
Great placement for a great poem. I treasure the lessons to be gathered from this poem; one being to care for and preserve the trees, one of the greatest life sources created by God. * Trees provide oxygen. In one year an acre of mature trees can provide enough oxygen for 18 people. Blessings.
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Date: 11/22/2020 6:38:00 AM
This is absolutely incredible, Andrea!!! I love, love love it! You're amazing and amaze me, once again, with your inspiring pen. Congrats on your top win. God bless you with many more amazing poems.
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Date: 11/22/2020 6:28:00 AM
My favourite of all your poems that I have read so far. Great atmosphere.
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Date: 8/18/2020 1:11:00 PM
... and you are a great story teller!
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