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In Sorrowed Shadows

~ Posy petal’d tear drops on saffron colored morns fall deeply in sorrowed shadows where sunshine is merely a reflection of the beauty once shared Clouded days sing dreary sonnets and the sunflowers are sad, for those cherished wings of brilliant colors are gone from this field Now a misty shade of gray lingering in the thoughts of one so missed… finds the garden gates locked, never to open again Where rainbows once painted blue hydrangea skies and daffodil promises carried our smiles, heartache now gathers in shapeless corners, missing this butterfly all had so come to adore and the earth weeps… 10/18/16 Written for the Words Drowned In Tears Poetry – Poetry Contest

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Date: 10/25/2016 6:37:00 PM
Chris congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned poem
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Chris Green
Date: 10/26/2016 8:02:00 AM
Thank you so very much Broken Wings. I am honored you enjoyed this one.
Date: 10/24/2016 1:46:00 AM
Love this verse Dear Chris.. a very well written poem ...a weeping earth!. Congratulations on your win//love, ANU:)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2016 8:24:00 AM
Thank you so very much Anu for your kind words.
Date: 10/24/2016 1:41:00 AM
You use beautiful imagery in your poem, so lively, I can see it as an image. Congratulations.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2016 8:23:00 AM
I am glad you can Darren. Thanks so much for commenting on my poem.
Date: 10/23/2016 7:16:00 PM
Love this beautiful verse, Chris.. a very well written poem. Congratulations on your win....Hugs eve
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2016 8:23:00 AM
Thanks so very much Eve, I am happy you liked it.
Date: 10/18/2016 9:57:00 PM
Hi Chris, This is good entry for the contest theme.It's a sad yet beautiful piece. I wish you the best of luck for the contest. Thanks for visiting my page. :-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 10/19/2016 8:40:00 AM
Thank you so very much Alexis for your kind words. I appreciate you stopping by my poem.
Date: 10/18/2016 8:33:00 PM
I can feel the pang of absence and loss in your poem dear friend.and it touches my heart.: ).
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Chris Green
Date: 10/19/2016 8:39:00 AM
Thank you for reading and leaving such nice comments for me Charmaine. I appreciate your thoughts and your encouragement.
Date: 10/18/2016 6:53:00 PM
This is very beautiful written , Chris.. thank you for sharing Hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 10/19/2016 8:38:00 AM
Thank you so very much Eve for your kind words.
Date: 10/18/2016 6:41:00 PM
Very beautiful Chris, you can tell you have the painters eye in this /|\
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Chris Green
Date: 10/19/2016 8:38:00 AM
Thanks so very much Rick for reading and commenting on my poem.
Date: 10/18/2016 5:30:00 PM
You're killing me with your sorrow Chris, you had to drag butterflies into it? I meant good luck with the contest, now I need a tissue...
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Chris Green
Date: 10/19/2016 8:38:00 AM
Thank you Paloma, sorry, fresh out of tissues, I have a paper towel. :) I appreciate your kind words my friend. I always look forward to your visits.
Date: 10/18/2016 5:23:00 PM
yeah thats nice Chris
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Chris Green
Date: 10/19/2016 8:37:00 AM
Thanks so very much Grant

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