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In Simple Lines Poetry Comes

*** In Simple Lines Poeetry Comes *** (“You must habit yourself to the dazzle of the light and of every moment of your life…” Walt Whit an, “Leaves of Grass”) My lines — My life… Riding moments, Raising poetry Like Beauty feels Glorious As Mother Nature is — when her winter here ends — Brought on to her time of re-birth — Sprouting life on toward the sun From and within layers of earth As Springtime’s newest whimsies grow Dew-tipped on all and dawn vibrant ‘tho ephemeral… Words of import In simple combinations Phrased memories come To waves of fields of grass — With their repeated reciting Of Poetry’s honored lines’ past And then, in sequenced words, Time has amassed The little aspects of me — Presented and quite apt for pennings of similes, Or for drawing on some imagery — In my heart — My simple lines were found Stemming from radiant peace Or ardent hours, With persistence versing inspirations Into my simple lines. With all attention closely given To reverberating echoes of a quintessential metaphor From melodies ‘oft playing unnoticed in the air Always Some distance from just so close By the fields of Spring’s fresh grasses — Lyric-tipped all Invite…Await Wandering poets with thirsty pens. E——————————————————————————————- (c) sally young eslinger 1/21/2023 Thanks be to God…

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Date: 1/30/2023 12:17:00 PM
A wonderful write/ending. Yes, thirsty pens. Have a great day..............
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 2/7/2023 7:27:00 AM
Paula, thanks for your comment! So glad you related to this poem. Take care! sally
Date: 1/22/2023 11:22:00 AM
A poets poem Sally, you capture the very essence and depth that inspires great poetry, I find the simple meaningful lines of metaphor, speak so much more than merely big bombastic poetic words, a delightful piece, cheers David
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 2/7/2023 7:24:00 AM
Hi, David! Your comment accurately applies to me too. Its one reason i Love pantoum poems & have a really hard time reading allIIteration pieces that IMHO get carried away in a thesaurus! 8-) sally with hugs 4 U
Date: 1/22/2023 7:05:00 AM
The poetry you wrote is really nice. It's unfortunate that so many people are wasting their time on lackluster poetry. But I liked what you were saying.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 2/7/2023 7:33:00 AM
And your commenthere is deeply reinforcing. Lately i spend full time hours, studying, reading, editing, writing. I love poetry and my goal is to get better i regard your writin and themes and am honoredbe your comment. Hugs, sally
Date: 1/21/2023 11:28:00 PM
Your poetry excels. Pity so many write low-grade poetry on the soup. Loved your reasoning though.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 2/7/2023 7:39:00 AM
Victor, your poetry and you come to my mind every day, because way back you inspired me into always trying to improve. It is a s l o w process & may have helped me alot. Ready?………Hugs! sally

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