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In Silence Sat An Hourglass

In silence sat an hourglass, never faultering from it's place, it was void of every concious thing, A reflection for a face, I felt it's weight upon my back, and for this I could not rest, at times I tried to trick that glass, it just put me to the test, for every time I stop some sand, some other sand would fall, and the more I tried the more I lied, I could never stop it all, so with pain and anger I grabbed that glass, and stared into it's face, and with pain and anger it just stared back, as the sand fell into place....

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Date: 6/10/2013 9:54:00 AM
Bryan, a nice little winning poem in Michael's dreaming into the bay contest... xox~ LINDA
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Bryan Dueck
Date: 6/20/2013 12:21:00 PM
Hi Linda thank you for your complement and ecouragement, I hope things are going good for you have a excellent day......Bryan,k
Date: 6/2/2013 3:03:00 PM
wow, a very interesting poem. I love the way you took this topic and did something so unique. Congrats.
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Bryan Dueck
Date: 6/5/2013 1:44:00 PM
Thank you Andrea for your complement, hope you have a great day....B.kris
Date: 6/2/2013 10:23:00 AM
A wonderful analogy of trying to hold back time and your form flowed like sand in an hourglass. Congratulations on this fine winning poem. SuZ
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Date: 5/23/2013 11:14:00 PM
wow... Bryan, the imagery sat there with the hourglass...i enjoyed the way you ended the poem.... great expressions... Linda
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Bryan Dueck
Date: 6/5/2013 1:45:00 PM
Thank you for your complement I'm glad you enjoyed this poem thanks....B. kris
Date: 5/22/2013 7:17:00 AM
Great write. I love the use of 'Allegory' you so accurately penned here. Thanks for stopping by my poems.
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Date: 5/21/2013 7:33:00 PM
Very well done. This poem flowed smoothly from start to finish. Great job maintaining the tempo. Nice write!
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Bryan Dueck
Date: 6/5/2013 1:46:00 PM
Thanks have a great day....kris

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