In Sheol

Lover Yes the love you evoke The heart you wove Spirit you broke Shadow am I Go to the Witch of Endor In Sheol my soul yes my love darkness unfolds In Sheol one weepeth dust wind blows cold Feeling is lost struggle to breathe seas are tossed Was I dead my lover? yes I believe so the shroud my cover You arose from death shined love on me I am resurrected was blind now I see...

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Skat A

Date: 5/26/2015 6:18:00 PM

Ken,, Stopping by to enjoy this Favorite poem of mine. .... Always ~SKAT~

Madelin Barton

Date: 9/9/2013 8:48:00 AM

"Sheol" the common grave or the abyss not commonly used word, which drew me towards this very unique piece god read

Ken Carroll
Date: 9/9/2013 9:53:00 AM

Hi Madelin, Thank you for the visit and wonderful comment. Ken

Skat A

Date: 9/5/2013 5:01:00 PM

Kudos, right back at you Ken. A deep rising thought, enjoyed. thanks ~SKAT~ PS..love the title ~

Ken Carroll
Date: 9/5/2013 5:04:00 PM

Hi Skat, Thanks for stopping by and leaving a beautiful comment. Ken

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2013 3:15:00 PM

A lovey poem and read my dearest Ken, you've taken us deep into your heart.. I like how steady one can feast when it comes to love. it takes 2 ta tangle .... and by the looks of it..you cut the dance to short... i love how perfect this poem feels..... xox~ Linda

Ken Carroll
Date: 9/5/2013 3:22:00 PM

Hi Linda, Thank you for your thoughts on this one.I have never been on to leave he dance too early.. Besos, Ken

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/5/2013 6:41:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by my page..Sara

Ken Carroll
Date: 9/5/2013 6:48:00 AM

Hi Sara, Thank you for your kind visit also. Ken

Dom- X-

Date: 9/5/2013 4:34:00 AM

well done, somehow Ken, I feel this comes from true emotions. I honestly feel you gave up to quick and blinded your own way. perhaps you are scared and you feel you are not grabbing her attention enough. Believing she broke your spirit, can be a mutual feeling. I felt like this towards a girl who shined me out of the dark. I would feel broken every time she would not contact. it is I who drove her away. all I can do now is thank her. the title drew me in. great one. DX

Ken Carroll
Date: 9/5/2013 4:39:00 AM

Hi Dom, Thanks for the comment. Yes I admit this depicts a dark moment I was feeling one night..The concept of Sheol from Hebrew thought and Saul seeking the help of the Witch of Endor seem to fit..Thanks for the visit. Regards, Ken