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In Sanctum

In a cave where Light is water Sight is ruler Of disorder Lest the body Cross the border Bumps and bruises Soon discover In a cave where Light is air The next step May not be there See the truth Use some care In dark places Light is air In a cave where Light is life One mistake Your cold as ice Don't find yourself In a hole Where light is the master And you it holds

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/1/2013 12:56:00 AM
Hi John, this is a skillful write and it really kept me engaged to the end. Posted 3 more today just for you. Having written over 1,500 poems, there never seems an end in sight. God bless, Maureen
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Date: 2/5/2013 12:27:00 PM
Interesting piece.
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Date: 1/31/2013 10:32:00 AM
I see this was a poem from a movie. I do not watch a lot of movies so cannot comment on this. Andrea is the movie buff. love phyl
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Date: 1/29/2013 5:12:00 PM
Enjoyed your wonderful write, love Elizabeth
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Date: 1/28/2013 8:25:00 PM
Beautiful analogies John, you make it sound so easy but the subject matter is complex and you wield your pen with skill. Love, Elizabeth
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Date: 1/29/2013 2:54:00 PM
it's about a movie.

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