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In Sanctum

In a cave where
Light is water
Sight is ruler
Of disorder
Lest the body
Cross the border
Bumps and bruises
Soon discover

In a cave where
Light is air
The next step
May not be there
See the truth
Use some care
In dark places
Light is air

In a cave where
Light is life
One mistake
Your cold as ice
Don't find yourself
In a hole
Where light is the master
And you it holds

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  1. Date: 3/1/2013 12:56:00 AM
    Hi John, this is a skillful write and it really kept me engaged to the end. Posted 3 more today just for you. Having written over 1,500 poems, there never seems an end in sight. God bless, Maureen

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 12:27:00 PM
    Interesting piece.

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 10:32:00 AM
    I see this was a poem from a movie. I do not watch a lot of movies so cannot comment on this. Andrea is the movie buff. love phyl

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 4:21:00 PM
    Very intruiging write! And quite engaging too. A pleasure to read :) I love the last two lines

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 5:12:00 PM
    Enjoyed your wonderful write, love Elizabeth

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 8:25:00 PM
    Beautiful analogies John, you make it sound so easy but the subject matter is complex and you wield your pen with skill. Love, Elizabeth

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    Date: 1/29/2013 2:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    it's about a movie.