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This Valentine, my love, will be divine I’ll whisk you off to every place and clime In room enclosed, we’ll travel round the globe Enchantment waits for us as we disrobe You'll lay me down on sandy island shore “Pretend” our game, adventure calls for more With sweetness on your lips, mine own you'll kiss A taste that rivals chocolate from the Swiss I'll whisper tales of wild Arabian Nights And plop into your mouth Turkish Delights I'll play the part of harem girl, then maid Then Warrior Princess come your heart to raid I’ll shower you with kisses, sweet and wet And make you lose your clothes on poker bet Those Vegas lights will twinkle in my eyes Then off to masquerade in a disguise Our bodies fuse on our gondola dream We skinny dip into Venetian stream The scented candles dim and light peeks in Your glow, my love, your scent is on my skin The world is you; you are my every place There is no beauty finer than your face This very room where you've made love to me Is paradise and where I long to be January 22, 2015 For Mystic Rose's Valentine Contest

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Date: 2/2/2015 4:57:00 AM
Congratulations on the first place it is another great piece of writing What else is one to expect from the desert orchid. love Shane xxx
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Date: 2/1/2015 3:47:00 PM
Love how you are in touch with every line on this poem Eileen, Awesome magic win.... CONGRATS luv ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 2/1/2015 8:41:00 AM
I am not surprised to see this one in the top position Eileen! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/1/2015 2:53:00 AM
The stage is yours Wondera XXXX rajat CONGRATS ON WIN
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/1/2015 2:55:00 AM
Thanks, Rajat. It's a stage I love to be on. :) Hugs
Date: 1/31/2015 6:53:00 PM
Congrad's on Your win. So pleasant to read your verse this evening. Light & Love
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/1/2015 2:55:00 AM
Thanks for passing by my Valentine write, Debbie...I enjoyed your comment. :)
Date: 1/31/2015 12:22:00 AM
Great win and a valentine to cherish. Congratulations.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/31/2015 1:24:00 PM
Thanks, Joyce. I appreciate your kind words on my Valentine poem.
Date: 1/30/2015 11:19:00 PM
Superb cascade of emotions and feelings, congrats on the win, Eileen
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/31/2015 1:24:00 PM
Thank you, Dr Ram. I was moved by your write.
Date: 1/30/2015 7:45:00 PM
Wow...such a wonderful, romantic poem, Eileen! So nicely written in one of my favorite forms. A heartfelt congratulations on your First Place win! Sandra
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/31/2015 1:25:00 PM
Sandra...thanks for your lovely visit to my Valentine poem. I do appreciate it. :) Hugs
Date: 1/30/2015 7:33:00 PM
Whhoohoo....this is an invitation to romance, all beautiful wrapped into a Valentine message ! Congratulations, Eileen on your winning poem~!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/30/2015 7:36:00 PM
Thanks ever so much, Carrie. I played to my audience, Vienna. She wanted a trip around the world. I enjoyed trying to come up with different places. I even googled most romantic places in the world! ;) Surprisingly...Istanbul, Turkey was on the list. Hubby and daughter just went there. I had to stay behind because of my teaching schedule...Oh well. Thanks ever so much for taking the time to read and comment. I'm so grateful for your visit. Hugs
Date: 1/30/2015 6:13:00 PM
Such a beautiful romantic write - well deserved first place for the queen of romance:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/30/2015 6:54:00 PM
Awww....thank you Jan. I must tell you...I'm absolutely thrilled that Vie favored my poem. How sweet of her!!! I'm basking in the glow. Thanks for sharing the moment with me. Hugs
Date: 1/30/2015 5:23:00 PM
Congratulations dear Eileen!!! Gold medal winner for an excellent poem which promised a lot from the word GO! Hugs // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/30/2015 6:55:00 PM
:) Did it really? I'm so so pleased you liked this piece, Paul. I'm so grateful that Vienna smiled on this. Thanks. Hugs
Date: 1/30/2015 2:51:00 PM
Beautiful romantic write and places to be captured in. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/30/2015 6:57:00 PM
:) Thanks ever so much, Eve. I'm so thrilled that Vienna looked favorably on this piece. I tried to bring a little of the world into it. Thank you for your kind visit and comment.
Date: 1/26/2015 6:58:00 PM
Together, tight in sublime heat we shall meet in the center of the Universe's heart and build a passion no age can defeat...I love it when your passion pounces aggressively and conquers Warrior Princess...you are a fantasy woman indeed! J.A.B.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/27/2015 12:30:00 AM
I love to conquer....it gives me exquisite joy to be in control. Yes, that is a very real part of my nature. I thrive on it....Imagination is a lovely thing, is it not? No one can steal a dream or make it any less real, Justin. In many ways, I am a fantasy woman...but my feelings are real. Thanks for visiting. HUGS
Date: 1/23/2015 11:45:00 AM
I am tempted to take one of these tours Eileen! I like what's on offer; your role-playing titillates the imagination...and anything to do with dark chocolate suits me fine! Looking forward to see where this is going to place on the winners' list! hugs // paul [ps...used to...?!]
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Paul Callus
Date: 1/23/2015 2:41:00 PM
I have already placed it high on the podium, that's why I gave it a top rating! Indeed, imagination and anticipation are the secrets of success!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/23/2015 11:49:00 AM
Paul....Paul, where would YOU place it? Please do tell me....I do like role playing. Imagination is a wonderful thing and adds spice and all things nice. To know you're tempted to take this tour....is wonderful news to me!!! Tell me when you're free and so I can do the booking! ;) Paul...honesty is my downfall....you know that....PS
Date: 1/22/2015 5:29:00 PM
Another signature write . . . you amaze me . . . OK, true confession . . . I am into dark chocolate fantasies!! Light and love dear little one! 7
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/22/2015 10:59:00 PM
Oh....Nutella has it's charm, but melted chocolate works as well! ;) Thanks for the visit, David. Hugs
Date: 1/22/2015 4:06:00 PM
Awesome addition to the contest. You express passion and sensuality like no other! Love your style, and I will be reading more of your recent works. That last stanza is magical. Another gem of yours! You write with so much heart and might. Admiring your light today! Always, Laura
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/22/2015 11:00:00 PM
Thanks, Laura. Your writes also are full of heart and soul. Is there any other way to write? :) Thanks for the visit, my dear. You've been to several of my writes. I'm honored by the visits and the lovely comments. Hugs
Date: 1/22/2015 3:53:00 PM
This is why men love to travel so much! I enjoyed this passionate journey to erotic places! Ohh la la all the way!
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Date: 1/22/2015 11:01:00 PM
OH OH OH OH!!!! I got my Oh la la from Mr Lamouruex! :) Thanks, Richard. I do have a fertile....imagination. I love spicing things up. Hubby used to play along...Thanks for the visit. Hugs
Date: 1/22/2015 3:50:00 PM
A very beautiful and sensuous love poem Eileen...The perfect valentine...hugs Tim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/22/2015 3:52:00 PM
Thanks, Tim. Hope Rose likes it. I read her instructions well....and she wants to be swept off her feet. :) I tried to get a worldly feel to it. That's what she wanted. You've got to know your audience. Thanks for the visit. Hugs

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