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In Response To My First Poem

Tommy Today is a blank sheet Oh! What desires I need to meet Must some go lacking Most important are the people You being one that needs my attention Tommy T oday is an open door O f opportunity to do for you M uch stronger today is my love M uch stronger is my respect Y earning to please you and God; today!! Tuesday, September 29, 2015 Sponsor: Silent One Contest: A Response To Your First Poem

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Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 10/2/2015 3:27:00 PM

Tommy is lucky to have you. Congrats on an excellent write and win. Hugs

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/2/2015 12:44:00 PM

Superb write Sara, here's wishing you continued success on the journey..'

Skat A

Date: 10/2/2015 1:04:00 AM

Sara, Congratulations on the response to your first poem ***SKAT

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/1/2015 9:15:00 AM

What a wonderful response! One of the best for last, this is my dessert!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/1/2015 3:06:00 AM

Wonderful both poems Sara so is the win! Big congrats!

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/30/2015 10:25:00 PM

Sara my friend, congrats on your win...

Eve Roper

Date: 9/30/2015 9:25:00 PM

congrats on your win. hugs eve

Jan Allison

Date: 9/30/2015 5:09:00 PM

what a lovely response to your original acrostic:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2015 3:17:00 PM

It's so nice to see how your attitude about him is getting better and stronger. Good for Tommy.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/29/2015 2:31:00 PM

Love how you alternated your response to the initial poem, Sara. Now you sound more reassured, knowing where you stand, and ready to please more than ever before! gl in the contest. // paul