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In Response To Carolyn Devonshire

In Response to Carolyn Devonshire Artist Ansel Adams and a Deceased War Veteran Widow Beautiful things begin by being black and white So you can start off and get things right Saving a place for each picture in your heart Even though his and my mind are miles apart. At another great picture of his will look And then think about all of the time it took To explain in a black and white picture form, A bright day about to become a big storm Her renderings were all that remain behind It was not pleasant or ever very kind While her husband had been buried below She may be only one who will know. Why shouldn't next thing be a necessity? Which will replace all of her self-pity That does provide pride in what we do; Why shouldn't her dreams have come true? It is so sad now that only remains Memories covered with miserable tear stains When she had taken her last look back There are things in this picture it does lack. James Thomas Horn, Retired Veteran

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Date: 4/1/2015 4:24:00 PM
Dear James, Your poem is beautifully written. I guess I do sound like I am filled with self pity, but it just the way it feels to lose a spouse at an early age. I am grateful for many other wonderful things that have come into my life. Some of my dreams have come true! I have been traveling and dealing with illness, so I am not on the site often. Your poem made me smile. Thank you for reading my work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/1/2015 6:33:00 PM
Making others happy and motivating them to write poems are my two primary goals in life. To make you smile is not only great, it is wonderful. Jim Horn
Date: 3/19/2015 7:33:00 AM
a very moving piece. Tugging at the heartstrings for a love that was lost.
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Date: 3/19/2015 4:58:00 PM
http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/best/11789/carolyn_devonshire Above if poem I was referring to. Nice hearing from you again. Hope you don't mind me sending some of my poems to you. Jim Horn
Date: 3/18/2015 10:57:00 AM
I read her poems, and I often check the link of "new poems" to find poems to reads, yes I read hers! Nice to meet you!
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Date: 3/17/2015 11:42:00 PM
James, what a beautiful poem!
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Date: 3/18/2015 4:33:00 AM
Thank you. Now you will have to go back and read Carolyn Devonshire's best poem and latest one she wrote about Ansel Adams to completely understand where I am coming from. How did you find my poem anyway? Jim Horn

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