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In Rapt Silence

* In the silence of the morning broken and disturbed with birdsong hardly curbed I walk sleepily to my back porch coffee already in hand to sit and listen to the woodland When I’m startled by new sound I hear close above my head the distinct hiss-shwep being said In unison, we both swivel our heads I, to find a barn owl sitting she to discover me silently emitting and there in the branch ten feet higher her mate tucks his round head eyes staring at me like the ghostly dead Barely moving with soft hissing breath holding sway with great diligence she looks about with quiet vigilance Their hiss-shwep sounds are being sent menacing to the little field mouse owls hoping for breakfast in the house Wings spread in silent swooping glide quick to lower branch and tree behold two more owls are perched to see In dark foliage mottled feathers blend hunters sitting quiet side by side, the search now looks quite intensified Then quiet as quiet as an owl can be down one swoops to the grassy ground and back to the tree in quick turn around a fight erupts with all wanting a little bite but he says no-no, this is my hunting treat you have to get your own breakfast meat *This is actually a Rhyming Tercet (terza rima is a form of a tercet) ~3 line form stanzas~ 6-26-2020 STRAND COMPLETELY NEW POETRY (1)any form any theme Poetry Contest 1st Place

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Date: 6/29/2020 2:42:00 PM
Witty, beautifully written and with a lot of wisdom. A big big congratulations! Well deserved.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/29/2020 4:16:00 PM
Hi Funom...thank you for your kind words. I'm so happy you have enjoyed a bit of nature here today. Enjoy this wonderful day. Jeanne"
Date: 6/29/2020 12:23:00 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP . Enjoyed the wonderful poem. Love.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/29/2020 9:21:00 AM
Hi Anisha, thank you so much...it is a thrill! so happy you enjoyed. Jeanne
Date: 6/28/2020 11:48:00 PM
Jeanne, powerful poem and picture of nature! Congratulations on your first place win!
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/29/2020 9:21:00 AM
Hi Sam...I sure was lucky to be sitting there...and having a woodland backyard certainly helps to get the chance to see such a sight...I'm glad you enjoyed the read. :D
Date: 6/28/2020 10:33:00 PM
I love sitting with nature, listening to her speak... the sights and sounds...magical.. great write, congrats on your win! hugs
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/29/2020 9:19:00 AM
Wouldn't it be fun for all of us to go on a poetry retreat to the redwoods or something? xoxox
Date: 6/28/2020 4:55:00 PM
wow, what a sight to see. Nature can be so fascinating to watch. i see this got a win. Hurrah! Congratulations.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/29/2020 9:18:00 AM
thanks Andrea...I was spellbound by the sight and was so happy they didn't mind my sitting there....
Date: 6/28/2020 12:10:00 PM
Jeanne, your really made this story come alive, love the photo as well.Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/29/2020 9:17:00 AM
Good Morning Eve...I'm glad you enjoyed...I was surprised my photo turned out! :D
Date: 6/27/2020 4:51:00 PM
Sweet sound! Jeanne! watched Carolina Warblers from a perch a few feet away this am meself from a bluff-top overlooking the confluence of the St Croix & Mississippi River in Prescott Wi...jmg
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/27/2020 5:00:00 PM
Sounds divine! :D
Date: 6/27/2020 3:55:00 PM
Beautiful poem. I like ones about mornings and nature. I have one on the entries today.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/27/2020 5:00:00 PM
Thanks Sunlite Wanter...I liked yours too.
Date: 6/27/2020 2:56:00 PM
I've only seen about two in the wild, they are majestic bird's for sure. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/27/2020 5:01:00 PM
Good Morning Tom, hope you're having a great week end. and thanks for the encouragement.

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