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In Praise of a Flower: the Honeysuckle Rose

I remember the first day we met In the morning dew soft and wet The mist of love upon your breath And you blushing like Negril sunset I remember your flared dress Your perfect beauty and loveliness May tongue longing for your breast Engorged globes of happiness. My father caught me open mouthed Just when honey visions sprouted Honeysuckle was the word he qouted While the butterflies there floated But I heard before men called you Morning glory, passion red and new I touched your petallous lips and knew My heart would always belong to you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/29/2009 8:50:00 AM
Beautiful couplet in those last two lines L'nass.Thank you for your always encouraging comments.Have a good weekend.Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/7/2009 4:22:00 AM
This write fis filled with magic transporting me back in time to regain some of what was lost...write on yard man.
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Date: 5/6/2009 11:42:00 PM
you love your flower so much and the last verse-:"my heart would always belong to you"--wonderful,just perfect---charma
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Date: 5/6/2009 6:34:00 PM
very nice poem, you spelt quote wrong though.good imagery.good imagination!!!
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Date: 5/6/2009 5:57:00 PM
If ever I have heard an exegesis of Soloman's to his shulammite,..this is it! I'm all smiles! Great write friend! james
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