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In plain view

Like a rusty old car, in plain view.
Me, unseen by you.

Received 1st place in "YOUR VERSE AGAIN any theme/any form max of 12 lines" contest

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  1. Date: 3/4/2012 10:56:00 AM
    Congrats Susan on your win.This is very nice.

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 8:44:00 AM
    Susan, congratulations on your win in Rick's contest :)

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 8:26:00 AM
    Very succinct Susan. Congratulations

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 6:32:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win with this excellent piece Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 9:40:00 PM
    SUSAN, Congratulations with your wonderful entry IN RICK'S CONTEST ;-) well done~ALWAYS PD*

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 6:59:00 PM
    Susan, CONGRATS to you!!!I love the imagery created!!~Very nice//see my blog and winner list!!!~God bless

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 10:14:00 PM
    Like it Susan. Congrats

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 7:42:00 PM
    WOW, first place, Susan. many got first place this time. I'm so happy you are on the list. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 5:09:00 PM
    Congratulations on a great write and a terrific win. Jon

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 7:51:00 AM
    I am stopping by to thank you for sharing your poetry with us Susan. I would also like to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/24/2011 10:07:00 PM
    No new poems from ya, girlie!! guess I will just get back upstairs. I bet there is very little action here on Xmas Eve. Nightie Night. Hope Santa brings you something very nice for your stocking!! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/24/2011 9:46:00 PM
    Susan... Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.

  1. Date: 12/23/2011 7:59:00 AM
    clean, concise and very nice!

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 11:37:00 PM
    AWWW, shucks, Susan You ain't no rusty car!!! haha. GOOD way to do the contest. So short. I hope I can be that clever. I'm gonna check out a few things and then get off here!

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 7:28:00 PM
    i don't look for beautiful and i dont look for clean, i dont look for stuck up, and i don't look for mean. so let me be the judge of what i might notice. i might be the freak but you did'nt know this.

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 6:41:00 PM
    Masterfully written Susan! I really enjoy the challenge of short poetry...and you rose to the challenge and exceeded with this poem!! Great Work!!