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In Paradise

I close these eyes flower of destiny as thoughts became fixed upon a crowned rose sailing the seven seas overflowing joyous dream Pouring out the highlights the inner voice sings warmly chants whistling with overwhelming happiness Today waves touched deeply in the rain I hold my hand out wishing to kiss your fingertips As love inside this ocean opens gate unto salt of this earth footprints remain pearl drops fall worshiping such beauty Swept away into another world washed pure is the surf that kisses you my love forever

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Bl Devnath

Date: 1/7/2016 10:24:00 AM

Excellent beauty indeed in your paradise. Loved always my lovely friend,bl

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/5/2016 5:56:00 AM

Definitely an apt title for this beautiful piece of poetry. Outstanding imagery and such sweet phrasing... The Irish are supreme when it comes to literature in general, poetry in particular and, of course, comedians! Well done Liam! Best wishes, Keith

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/5/2016 4:54:00 AM

- I become "swept away into another world", with this beautiful poem dear Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2016 4:00:00 PM

Paradise for me is this kind of world too, Liam. very nice poem, and happy New Year to you.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/1/2016 12:31:00 PM

An outstanding poem the canvas of words or so detailed

White Sage

Date: 1/1/2016 7:14:00 AM

nice poem, this is...great

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/31/2015 4:36:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow! Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I truly enjoy it! A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away,enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Amazing!I love it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful! Excellent imagery!Outstanding poem.Just perfect!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^