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In Pacem

We missed it, Dad__ that last embrace that bonds the blood of men who always faced into the wind of love and never knew its source. So arrived the days in early fall. We settled for a handshake then, and after all the years that we pretended we were close, the words, like leaves, were also glown away: weightless, dry and crumbling. There they stood, two helpless men without so much as one distracting tear, who lied about the year to come, and of those dear and fresh remembrances beyond the day of parting. You knew the last stop would be Arlington, albeit not on Chaplain's hill where sleeping comrades filled the ground you loved. the slope beneath that crowning tree awaited you. So there it was, we heard once more the sound of Taps, the slap against the sky of twenty-one explosions, and a young man's tribute to an officer who wore two crosses and a silver leaf-- who marched with his old comrades years before. Now as this aging son who would embrace with spirit arms, I wish you rest, old soldier, there to find the peace you never knew in war... the peace we shared that final afternoon, on Chaplain's Hill. ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/22/2012 7:19:00 AM
A pleasure to read and congratulate you on your featured poem this week Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/21/2012 9:07:00 AM
Beautifully spoken, Robert. After all, as Schweitzer claimed, it's all about life! daver
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Daver Austin
Date: 8/21/2012 9:08:00 AM
Oh, and Congrats on the selection.
Date: 7/12/2012 5:58:00 PM
The additional information on the bottom is VERY interesting but confusing, where you left with positive feelings about the military? One last bit of general advice writing in the present tense helps draw the reader into the scene with you. Light & Love
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Robert Ludden
Date: 8/21/2012 9:48:00 AM
It should not have been there. It was intended for another poem. Sorry.
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/12/2012 6:38:00 PM
Thank you, Debbie! I'm chagrined about the typo. Will fix. All of your advice (and mild criticism) is VERY much appreciated. And, though my attitude toward the military is never positive. I do generally agree about the preference of present tense. In this piece, reflection about the past seemed to be relevant. Please do react to still more. I would consider it an honor.
Date: 7/12/2012 5:57:00 PM
Hi there new nice poet..some folks here nicknamed me HM [Head Mistress LOL] so here goes right of the bat watch out for the word [that] most times it is unnecessary for the meaning of the sentence and other times yoou really want [which]. Line 10 check [glown], maybe [grown] Excellent line [the slap against the sky]
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Date: 7/7/2012 2:50:00 PM
‡ I Must Say That I Absolutely Loved The Quality, Meaning & Depth Amid This Exquisite Piece In Artful Verse, My New Found Friend * As Much As I Am Looking Forward Even More So Now Unto Your Tasteful I Am Certain, Eroticism's Poe * Also, Enjoyable May Be All Else It Seems I May View From Your Depthful & Gifted Brush * I Could Journey Into An Opposites Thought In Re This Moment Yet, Beauty Is Beauty & Should Be Savored * My Luv, Rachel ‡
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/7/2012 3:19:00 PM
Thank you, Rachel. You are too kind to me, though I'll admit that I look forward to more of your comments as we go along.

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