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In Negative Light

One moment east of twilight Shadows outdistance the sun Sharpening peaks and hallows, Honed against the sparks of light. Deep in the brow of the silence I stand to watch the moonrise, Overtaken by the dark
____________ For Contest : 215 Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 11/21/2014 11:21:00 PM
Incredible, Carrie! Congrats on taking the top spot!!
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Date: 11/16/2014 1:52:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie. Once again a beautiful poem.
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Date: 11/16/2014 1:51:00 PM
I am sure that Nette liked this one for it is very much like what she writes..Way to go ..Congrats on this delightful win..Sara
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Date: 11/16/2014 11:57:00 AM
wowowow, definitely this belonged at the TOP. Excellent work. Congrats, Carrie.
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Date: 11/16/2014 10:20:00 AM
I see how this won, discriptive and well written..congratulations
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Date: 11/16/2014 9:41:00 AM
Carrie, congratulations on your 1st place win on your lovely poem that is so full of imagery. Sandra
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Date: 11/15/2014 4:34:00 PM
packed with imagery and deep substance... I knew this would top the list, carrie... thanks for joining my contest with my resounding congrats!
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Date: 11/15/2014 7:29:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful Carrie many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/15/2014 2:53:00 AM
All are encrypted by silence before world explodes and conflicts begin. Great XXXX RAJAT
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Date: 11/9/2014 10:54:00 AM
Wow that's a lovely Heptagonet Carrie! Gl in contest my friend !
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