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In Need of Words

I crave for a breathing rhyme where syllables dance on air-- a harvest of words which releases evening's fire, this ember from beasts within must be snuffed with madness-- for late hours teeter between a phrase and a line; trembling, my body needs sleep as a verse takes a rough draft. Brian Strand Contest 110

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/18/2018 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Well done!
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Date: 8/17/2018 8:13:00 PM
I know just what you mean but you have put it so fluidly and set it into matter. Well done and congrats on winning acknowledgement
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Date: 8/17/2018 4:41:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Franco.
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Date: 8/17/2018 1:39:00 AM
late reply, franco... a grand poem with a winning streak...thanks for your comments!...huggs
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