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In My Vibrant Dream

*Past silver groves of willows weeping near a crystal stream, I move with an excitement flowing in my vibrant dream. Those colors that I take for granted in the concrete world shine brilliantly like buds of roses that have come unfurled. Ahead there is a field of daisies - wild yellow in bloom. I’m feeling golden; such enchantment whisks away all gloom. Atop a hill as bright a green as Ireland’s emerald isle - as day’s last rays of sun shine down - is where I’ll stay a while. Inside my dream appears white parchment; in my hand a quill! Across the sky there splashes splendor; all the earth grows still. A white swan’s feather now dips into ink a cobalt blue. As sky bursts crimson, I am painting all this dream for you! *Past silver groves of willows weeping is a line I borrowed from Heather Ober's "Into the Gloaming" Written by Andrea Dietrich For Richard Lamoureux's Pick a Line Any Line Poetry Contest

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  1. Date: 12/1/2013 7:47:00 AM
    Andrea What lovely imagery and description to a wonderful world of peace and charm. Nice job Thanks for commenting on my King Of Creeps poem

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 2:23:00 PM
    Andrea, lovely poem, you found a wonderful line and managed to make the rest sing right in line.

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 2:03:00 PM
    awesome winning poem Andrea, ............ luv ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 12:31:00 PM
    Oh my....lovely Andrea....a nice tune..too....congratulations

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 7:18:00 AM
    Andrea this is beautiful....congrats on your well deserved win :) hugs

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 8:26:00 PM
    Hi ANdrea, --A beautiful poem and line... congratulations :-)...xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 2:39:00 PM
    Andrea, this is perfection at it's best my dear,congratulations on your winning spot it is dotted with success love xxx

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 12:32:00 PM
    How lovely a win is this........and Heather must be thrilled that her words inspired your own! Congratulations, Andrea!

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 10:33:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning place Andy love xx

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 8:33:00 AM
    a lovely write Andrea...congrats on your win

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 8:30:00 AM
    This is truly vibrant, thanks for participating in my contest. Congratulations Andrea.

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 7:23:00 AM
    Andrea such a lovely dream I felt I was walking with you in it congrats on win Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 10:12:00 AM
    Wish I had dreams like this one. Loved the colors. So, I'm way behind, but feeling a bit better. Love, daver

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 3:23:00 AM
    So, so beautiful Andrea - thanks for sharing... So glad you found my 'Bathroom Engaged' lol. You are so right of course!

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 7:33:00 PM
    Oh my goodness, that last stanza is magical! You make writing sound like a magnificent experience, and it truly is. (I am so honoured that you borrowed a line from me!)

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 5:33:00 PM
    very good poem Andrea gl in contest Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 1:26:00 PM
    Just like a beautiful painting !!Lovely poem.

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 11:28:00 AM
    Wow! This is a magnificent poem. The whole poem is a masterpiece. I love it. Also, I must read Heather Ober's poem "Into the Gloaming" because that first line just blew me away. Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 2:24:00 PM
    Excellent poetry and imagery. It certainly describes a desirable dream world. I mean, who wouldn't want to be on that hill overlooking peace and serenity? I know I would. I hope this poem is seen for what it delivers when it comes time to judge the contest. I can't imagine a better entry. Thanks for sharing and good luck Andrea. Rockman (Thanks for the flea comments too.) :-)

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 1:35:00 PM
    That's got a classic feel to it. Lovely poetry! "Into the Gloaming" was a good one to choose from...liked it maself.