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In My Vibrant Dream

*Past silver groves of willows weeping near a crystal stream, I move with an excitement flowing in my vibrant dream. Those colors that I take for granted in the concrete world shine brilliantly like buds of roses that have come unfurled. Ahead there is a field of daisies - wild yellow in bloom. I’m feeling golden; such enchantment whisks away all gloom. Atop a hill as bright a green as Ireland’s emerald isle - as day’s last rays of sun shine down - is where I’ll stay a while. Inside my dream appears white parchment; in my hand a quill! Across the sky there splashes splendor; all the earth grows still. A white swan’s feather dips into a hue of cobalt blue. As sky bursts crimson, I am painting all this dream for you! *Past silver groves of willows weeping is a line I borrowed from Heather Ober's "Into the Gloaming" For Richard Lamoureux's Pick a Line Any Line Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/1/2013 7:47:00 AM
Andrea What lovely imagery and description to a wonderful world of peace and charm. Nice job Thanks for commenting on my King Of Creeps poem
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Date: 11/8/2013 2:23:00 PM
Andrea, lovely poem, you found a wonderful line and managed to make the rest sing right in line.
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Date: 9/18/2013 2:03:00 PM
awesome winning poem Andrea, ............ luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/14/2013 12:31:00 PM
Oh my....lovely Andrea....a nice tune..too....congratulations
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Date: 9/14/2013 7:18:00 AM
Andrea this is beautiful....congrats on your well deserved win :) hugs
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Date: 9/13/2013 8:26:00 PM
Hi ANdrea, --A beautiful poem and line... congratulations :-)...xox~ LINDA
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Date: 9/13/2013 12:32:00 PM
How lovely a win is this........and Heather must be thrilled that her words inspired your own! Congratulations, Andrea!
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Date: 9/13/2013 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Andy love xx
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Date: 9/13/2013 8:33:00 AM
a lovely write Andrea...congrats on your win
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Date: 9/13/2013 8:30:00 AM
This is truly vibrant, thanks for participating in my contest. Congratulations Andrea.
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Date: 9/13/2013 7:23:00 AM
Andrea such a lovely dream I felt I was walking with you in it congrats on win Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/6/2013 10:12:00 AM
Wish I had dreams like this one. Loved the colors. So, I'm way behind, but feeling a bit better. Love, daver
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Date: 9/3/2013 3:23:00 AM
So, so beautiful Andrea - thanks for sharing... So glad you found my 'Bathroom Engaged' lol. You are so right of course!
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Date: 9/2/2013 7:33:00 PM
Oh my goodness, that last stanza is magical! You make writing sound like a magnificent experience, and it truly is. (I am so honoured that you borrowed a line from me!)
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Date: 9/2/2013 5:33:00 PM
very good poem Andrea gl in contest Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/2/2013 1:26:00 PM
Just like a beautiful painting !!Lovely poem.
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Date: 8/31/2013 11:28:00 AM
Wow! This is a magnificent poem. The whole poem is a masterpiece. I love it. Also, I must read Heather Ober's poem "Into the Gloaming" because that first line just blew me away. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 8/30/2013 2:24:00 PM
Excellent poetry and imagery. It certainly describes a desirable dream world. I mean, who wouldn't want to be on that hill overlooking peace and serenity? I know I would. I hope this poem is seen for what it delivers when it comes time to judge the contest. I can't imagine a better entry. Thanks for sharing and good luck Andrea. Rockman (Thanks for the flea comments too.) :-)
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Date: 8/30/2013 1:35:00 PM
That's got a classic feel to it. Lovely poetry! "Into the Gloaming" was a good one to choose from...liked it maself.
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Date: 8/30/2013 11:31:00 AM
You describe it so beautifully I'd love to go there. Love, daver
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Date: 8/30/2013 11:15:00 AM
Really a beautiful vibrant dream and stopping by....., lovely done. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 8/30/2013 9:57:00 AM
beautiful write - and what a great line Heather came up with too
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Date: 8/29/2013 10:47:00 PM
Marvelous exquisite poem, green being a religious fav, i admire yor greeny wordin, d Emerald isle and other, wow! Fond wishes!:)
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Date: 8/29/2013 7:07:00 PM
Great entry for my contest, thanks for participating. I still have spots available for anyone who wishes to join in.
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Date: 8/29/2013 7:05:00 PM
Very colourful and dreamy write Petal Oh, oh yeah, that's what it was lol, Good luck in the contest. Take care, Richard
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