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in my subconcious

as the wind blows through the trees
a calm cool breeze
cools me down a little bit
and puts my mind at ease
my state of mind normal
my focus get cash
as i enjoy every breath
for as long as it lasts
be thankful 4 the time i was given to live
always learning new lessons
from different things that i did
i was only doing my own thing
just doing my part
got your mind captivated 
by the thought i just sparked

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  1. Date: 5/4/2010 10:00:00 PM
    very impressive, enjoyed it much, have a nice one,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/4/2010 5:15:00 PM
    wow, i like this one, we do need to keep focus on what we want... and as we stumble along the way learn from it and continue on with our god givin life, a good one orlandus pleased to read:)

  1. Date: 5/3/2010 5:44:00 PM
    Wonderful write. I like it

  1. Date: 5/3/2010 10:58:00 AM
    I enjoyed that