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In My Solitude

Here I stand facing the crimson sea; My bare feet deeply mounted~ on the silken shore as the creeping sun like an ember ensconcing~ on distant islets leaving a warm afterglow. Alas, my heart is as cold as the gust of winds caressing my hair making it sway like that of Pocahontas. 6 July 2020 1ST Place STRAND completely new ( 5 ) any theme any form Contest Judged: 7/6/2020 2:20:00 AM Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 7/11/2020 2:24:00 PM
Love your style!! Congrats for your win in this contest I am reviewing right now. This was a much deserved win.
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Date: 7/7/2020 2:54:00 PM
I am speechless Pocahontas...
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Date: 7/6/2020 9:50:00 PM
Illuminating visions that polish the mind, my compliments truly for your righteous endeavors, achieving 1st Place, Kudos! -- Aloha~@William
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Date: 7/6/2020 12:45:00 PM
Such a visceral picture you painted, JCB! I can feel the sand, the sunset and the wind. Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 7/6/2020 10:11:00 AM
Rich in feeling and image. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/6/2020 6:56:00 AM
Big congrats JCB--you won before I had a chance to comment--well done, indeed.
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Date: 7/6/2020 5:56:00 AM
Congrats on your top win!;)
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Date: 7/6/2020 4:10:00 AM
Lovely solitude moments JCB. Congrats on fine placement. Mohan
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