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In My Own Element

I meander wistfully- - eyes tracing a panel filled with orange stars as toes of flowers bend in choreographed waltz, my element alights through midnight hours tasting the breast of moon. And in the stillness of dusk when all boughs turn to virtues and sins I will find my own presence in a caravan of pinned roses in the shade--- till darkness swallows the fog, distilled while in a collage of framed moments I inscribe my own name, a signature which marks the territory from fertile clay; waltzing not, though flowing in a natural rhythm like a rare petal..for there's just one of me, as I meander wistfully - -
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Date: 1/22/2014 1:23:00 PM
great description Nette love your wistfulness congrats on win Shadow x smile hugs
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Date: 1/22/2014 9:48:00 AM
another great piece from one of the great poets on PS..Congratulations friend Nette. thanks for passing by. I'm also affected at Bangkok shutdown coz of the traffic but I still goes to work everyday. Have a blessed day always :) hugsss ;)
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Date: 1/22/2014 6:51:00 AM
Congrats Nette, You always write the good ones. Now leave one or two for me.....Hugs....Roger
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Date: 1/21/2014 10:48:00 PM
Brava! Beautiful, Nette. Grats!
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Date: 1/21/2014 9:25:00 PM
Inspiring write on the words of wisdom and congrats on the win, nette
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Date: 1/18/2014 9:26:00 PM
This reminds me a nursery rhyme," there are many fishes in the sea, but there's only one like me." Something like that. Empowering poem divinely penned! Thank you for making me reflect on my sense of individuality..
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Date: 1/18/2014 7:48:00 PM
i enjoyed this read tonight, thanks for sharing your imagination with me tonight. cheri
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Date: 1/18/2014 1:57:00 PM
Hi Nette, Beautiful write of self-discovery!
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Date: 1/18/2014 9:40:00 AM
Those images dig deep into my mind. Absolutely redeeming as we journey inward to honor the self." A rare petal,just one of me" uplifts and makes this poem really special!
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Date: 1/17/2014 8:50:00 PM
Sounds like a delightful and fulfilling meander! Awesome as always nette ! luv,Deb
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Date: 1/17/2014 7:55:00 PM
You have inclined my head to higher grounds with the powers behind this tremendous write my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this fabulous poem this evening! You have delighted me by the splendor of this incredible piece! Great Work!!
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Date: 1/17/2014 7:31:00 PM
It is a lovely poem, Nette, a meandering surreal soul-search, enjoyed much,..I am good, how abt you? !!
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Date: 1/17/2014 5:59:00 PM
soul searching poem Nette full of yearning love it Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 1/17/2014 5:55:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..To be able to meander 'pon a path would be nice..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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