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When man learns to control his greed, 

only then will better men succeed

In this mirror, you can hear the child in a tall grass field and running wild The timothy grass hides this boy from view Your watching, and wondering, is that you Too few summers, with many lessons to learn from earth, deer, trout, eagle and fern As student's we gain and strengthen our voice for the path we follow in life, is our choice Take joy in this journey but, leave no track If Mother Earth cries, then you can't go back I see in this mirror, that the child has grown a man,now stands strong, to hunt on his own As he ventures through this forest of strife making choices that affect generations of life Pray that his choices weren't guided by greed Mother Earth cried, the "Great Spirit" takes heed 50 years of choices, in this generation's reign Tears come to my eyes, I feel Mother Earth's pain Man's greed and arrogance spoiled water, air, sky and land Mother Earth, I see is crying, poisoned by human hand With grand-children sick, from this contamination of earth I ask grand-father's guidance, that he return Mother's mirth Man has stopped listening, he's only guided by greed Are only deaf people listening, I keep planting the seed I need your strength and wisdom to guide me along without fear of what's coming, my relations are strong Now I see in the mirror, an elder in white This mirror fades to darkness, I pray for the light
for "The Rhyming Game" contest The mirror doesn't lie!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/22/2013 8:08:00 AM
Good morning Tom, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the sous HOME PAGE.... always & forever *LINDA
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Date: 9/21/2013 8:14:00 AM
lovely journey of memories Tom in this congrats on being featured Shadow x smiles
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Date: 9/18/2013 3:35:00 AM
couldn't stop reading till after the last line when i was looking for more. nice piece there. well written and easily understood. thanks
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Date: 5/21/2012 4:12:00 PM
Tom, , I'm liking the rhyming game Joyce cooked up herself! Congratulations with your awesome poem, take care :-) * PD
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Date: 5/19/2012 10:21:00 PM
A truthful and well stated poem. I very much enjoyed the read. TLee
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Date: 5/19/2012 8:38:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Tom. Excellent write. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 5/19/2012 6:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joyce's "Rhyming Game" contest Tom. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2012 3:07:00 AM
Very nice... and congrats... Terry
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Date: 5/19/2012 2:05:00 AM
Tom, congrats on your win..David
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Date: 3/23/2012 10:31:00 PM
This is an excellent piece of poetry you've written!!! The vivid details are so accurate. I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 11/6/2011 9:00:00 AM
nice work you have here. quite a great way of expressing your ideology on environmental abuse n negligence
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Tom Larrow
Date: 11/7/2011 10:36:00 PM
Thank you for the encouragement, enjoy writing Have a great day!
Date: 11/5/2011 8:54:00 PM
A good write Dr Ram,,, i to will pray for light... thank you for sharing,..p.d.
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Tom Larrow
Date: 11/7/2011 10:36:00 PM
Thank you for the encouragement, enjoy writing Have a great day!

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