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In My Mind

(Sonnetina Rispetto) In my mind you're here day and night For some time you brought in sunlight Now each day I just think of you Non-stop my heart for you will cry No matter what I do and try Even when your love makes me blue In my mind you're here day and night For some time you brought in sunlight. Without you now empty's my heart It's all broken, just torn apart Now each day I just think of you Even when your love makes me blue In my mind you're here day and night For some time you brought in sunlight. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 August,07,2014 Author's notes: The "Sonnetina Rispetto" is a new poetry form created by Dorian Petersen Potter on September 8,2009. This form has 14 lines with 8 syllables each. It can be written in 3 quatrain stanzas and a couplet or with an Octave(8) and a Sestet(6) lines. The rhyme scheme is as follows: A1,A2,B1,c,c,B2,A1,A2,d,d,B1,B2,A1,A2. The capitals A1,A2,B1 and B2...stands for the refrain lines in the poem. Specifications restated: Stanzaic: Either 4 quatrains and a couplet or a sestet and an octave. Isosyllabic: Eight syllable per line Repetitive: requires two refrain lines, each repeated twice. Rhyme pattern: A1,A2,B1,c,c,B2,A1,A2,d,d,B1,B2,A1,A2.

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Date: 9/11/2014 6:48:00 PM
I am truly impressed by your creativity... Nicely done, my friend..... I bow to your artistic talent...... Jake
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/11/2014 7:37:00 PM
Thank you so much John! Glad you liked it my friend. Best wishes! Xxxxxx D.
Date: 9/10/2014 1:52:00 AM
nice work done... this can be really termed as creativity.. HUGS..
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/11/2014 7:40:00 PM
Thank you so much Malik! You're very kind my sweet friend.Hugs to you too! Best wishes! xxx D.
Date: 9/8/2014 5:33:00 PM
What a stunning poem and form you have created - I love the rhyme scheme and repeated lines - its a 7 from me! hugs Jan
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/11/2014 7:42:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan! Glad you liked it and try my style sometimes in the future. xxx D.

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