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In My Hand

In My Hand Your voice travels all around my soul.. Clinging to pieces that warmly unfold.. Temperatures rise as words are swallowed.. With silent gestures that our hands will follow.. Into the darkness of bliss we scamper free.. Where the rain of desire shines from you to me.. Stuck to each other till the morning air peels us apart.. All through my day the evening plays in my heart.. Now words drop like an hourglass of sand.. And a new poem now falls in my hand..

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Celeste Jordan

Date: 11/13/2012 11:16:00 AM

Love it! Words flow off the paper! Great

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/12/2012 6:03:00 PM

Hey you :) can you give me 2 of these couplets for my contest? 2+2 =4 ;) Light & Love

Len Gasun

Date: 11/12/2012 10:00:00 AM

You're indeed a GREAT POET MY DEAR FRIEND, MICHAEL. HAND SALUTE FOR YOUR OUTSTANDING PIECES ESPECIALLY THIS ONE! Winner for sure! Again, good luck and all the best! I'm always thanking you for your visits. Sorry to hear that your mom had suffered that ailment before but I'm extremely happy to hear that she is a survivor. As I've said, there's always miracle in healing. Please give my sweet regards to her. love/hugs, Leonora

Robert Ludden

Date: 11/12/2012 9:22:00 AM

To the master of visual poetry...each line rewarding. One could learn a lot from the study of your writing. I'm very impressed. I enjoyed meeting you this morning, and thank you for visiting my own work. I do hope you will be back to give me more of your profound impressions. -Dean

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 11/11/2012 8:45:00 AM

Very beautiful Michael. The words drop like an hour glass of sand. I like that. Have a nice day. Lucilla

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/10/2012 5:14:00 PM

GENTLE AND SOFT SWEET EMOTION FROM U MICHAEL LUV .. A DELIGHTFUL CANOPY OF PASSION AND POETRY AS ONLY U CAN MIX .. THANKXX SO MUCH FOR MY BIG WIN IN REFLECTIONS ..ALWAYS A JOY TO CREATE FOR U LUV .. WE SPENT SAT. CLEANING UP AGAIN .. SO COLD HERE ALREADY ..MORE LIKE WINTER THAN FALL SO YOUR HUGS KEEPING ME TOASTY WARM AS I SIT IN FRONT OF FIREPLACE WITH THOUGHTS OF MY WK ..JG IN HUGGY MODE ..XOXO

Terry O'Leary

Date: 11/10/2012 4:05:00 PM

Very nice poem, Michael... full of emotion, frrling... Terry

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 11/10/2012 10:16:00 AM

great write friend Michael....so creative...have a good day!! (^_^) hugs!l

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/10/2012 9:48:00 AM

And this new poem sure rocks the world...Your words sure state what is unfurled! Sorry, I just wanted to add another line to your glorious and masterfully written poem here my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this incredible and outstanding write this morning! What a delightful and amazing piece you have written, Great Work!!