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iron gates - swing open on rusty hinges the day cold and windy the cemetery vast with rows and rows of headstones and massive stone crypts the statues weathered beautiful - O, there is a beauty to behold as trees bend in prayer and all the roads cross rough and cracked uneven with ruts leaves brittle orange, brown and red crunching beneath my meandering feet- there are inscriptions too many to fathom and creatures scurry birds sing songs a trickling pond amongst the tombs there are whispers do you hear them ? a gnarled tree protects your rest as a breeze tangles my long hair and takes my tears - O, such fathomless love has been lost your memories like daggers to my heart plunging over and over again - O, repose, repose and I who forever weeps will never forget never forget now, I place a kiss upon a wilted red rose and leave you in peace . . . __________________ July 01, 2022 Poetry/Imagism/in memory Copyright Protected, ID 07-1470-909-01 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, A Brian Strand Premiere Choice sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 07/03/2022 First Place

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Date: 7/17/2022 6:38:00 AM
This is a beautiful and evocative creation of deep felt emotion and image. I'm there with you, thanks for this elegant poem Paul
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Date: 7/17/2022 11:40:00 AM
Paul, thank you so much for the compliment and wonderful comment, blessings ~ Constance
Date: 7/8/2022 11:29:00 PM
Heart wrenching and sad, yet beautiful. Congratulation on a well deserved win, my friend.
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Date: 7/10/2022 4:44:00 AM
Barbara, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/5/2022 7:20:00 AM
An outstanding piece my dear friend Constance! Congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win! Thanks for sharing your gem. God bless you. Hugs
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Date: 7/5/2022 7:38:00 AM
Len, thank you so much for the compliment, the comment and compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/4/2022 4:59:00 AM
A poem full of feelings. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/4/2022 7:33:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/3/2022 8:52:00 PM
Back to fave this masterpiece! I would love re reading this in years and years to come!
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Date: 7/4/2022 7:34:00 AM
JCB, thank you so much for the FAV and the compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/3/2022 1:38:00 PM
Aesthetic, picturesque invocation, vibes so spontaneous. Congratulations on the deserving win... Silpika
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Date: 7/4/2022 7:34:00 AM
Silpika, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/3/2022 11:51:00 AM
What a solemn poem!! I love the line: "O, there is a beauty to behold as trees bend in prayer". I couldn't sigh in wonderment more! Congratulations on your well-deserved trophy WIN!
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Date: 7/4/2022 7:35:00 AM
JCB, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/3/2022 10:04:00 AM
I can only echo what's already been said Constance. Great imagery. Very descriptive. Very poignant. It's one of those poems I think that would be enhanced even further by a 'La France recital'. :) Cheers - Gary
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Date: 7/4/2022 7:36:00 AM
Gary, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/3/2022 6:21:00 AM
Very descriptive and meandering. Congrats on your winner. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 7/3/2022 6:37:00 AM
Sara, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/3/2022 5:57:00 AM
Yes! Just beautiful! Congratulations! I love: a gnarled tree protects your rest as a breeze tangles my long hair and takes my tears
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Date: 7/3/2022 6:38:00 AM
Kim, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations, I love those words created also, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/3/2022 4:59:00 AM
This is wonderful. I love it... such a deep and emotive piece with amazing insight and clarity. Simply put, beautiful. Congratulations on your first place. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 7/3/2022 6:39:00 AM
Gina, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and compliment, love and blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/1/2022 7:27:00 AM
a magnificent piece, Dear Constance - depicting sadness and peace with sublime expressions. This is a fave for me. Love and blessings, Dear Friend ~ Mala
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Date: 7/1/2022 12:32:00 PM
Mala, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and FAV, appreciate, blessings ~Constance

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