In Meadow Embrace

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Written: June 17, 2023 In the meadow's embrace, silence resides, Where lambs are calm, grazing alongside, A tapestry of serenity, from top to toe, Nature's symphony, with such grace flows. The gentle breeze whispers through the grass. Caressing the lambs as they slowly amass, Their woolly coats, a blanket so warm, Protecting them from any approaching storm. Nature's symphony plays in meadow grace. Colored tones blend in a magnificent dance. Butterflies flutter and swing their wings. Secrets are being shouted at the hovering. The meadow blooms with vibrant delight. A chorus of petals is a mesmerizing sight.

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Ricky Muse

Date: 6/19/2023 6:16:00 AM

Beautiful. This poem is quite simply a transfer of emotion which is all a poem should be.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 6/17/2023 4:16:00 PM

I think Jennifer summed it up most eloquently. This poem just spills from ones tongue, like golden treacle. Peace and serenity cascade around my screen as I utter your magnificent words. The gentleness of lambs is captured, and the symphony which butterflies dance to is awe inspiring. What marvellous talent you have SP.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/17/2023 12:39:00 PM

This is such a beautiful nature poem, calm serene as are the lamb what magnificence there is around us, yet do we give it the love it gives us, do we whisper to nature that we will tend to her wants, keep her looking as lovely as she is. I have not eaten lamb in a year, i fear i have been an accomplice in the slaughter of lambs and fast becoming a vegetarian. Lovely poem, Bravo Lassad. Blessings galore. Jennifer.