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In Love Alone

When my thoughts are at its deepest And all cease so that i may be in emptiness I am forever filled yet because there is someone in my heart Someone who offers a wicked love So wicked, i wonder what, when or why With whispers and whimpers, this love is wicked but humble It leaves me hungrily happy but hostile in harmony. Confusion is contrasting in my minds confidement with my heart At last,trust in agreement At peace And lastly my minds sends sweet symphonies of singing so subtle that this can only be called one thing : Lonely love

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Patrick Nigros

Date: 9/9/2013 2:32:00 AM

Welcome to the soup,,, what a sweet intro,,,,

Kenisha Shines

Date: 9/8/2013 8:46:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup,beautiful write.

Skat A

Date: 9/7/2013 8:10:00 PM

Hi Sarah, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *

Sarah Stainbank

Date: 9/6/2013 2:11:00 AM

Thanks! means a lot

Poet Tacito

Date: 9/5/2013 8:03:00 PM

Fantastic. A very deep, melancholic writing. Love can be misleading, at times. Excellent work!

Christine Saunders

Date: 9/5/2013 2:00:00 PM

#Loved it Ms Stainbank :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2013 12:53:00 PM

hello, Sarah, thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/5/2013 10:43:00 AM

Welcome to P-Soup, Sarah ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)