In Love

IN LOVE ------------------------- Love is nectar. Love is heaven. Heaven like home, we always need where soul ever smiles, never feels tension. In love, you are my music, I am your musician. Love is trust. Love is hope. Hope hands success after little failure or without any flop. In love, Your are my ocean, I am your raindrop. Love is life. Love is relation. Relation can only be cemented with mutual trust and extreme affection. In love, You are my ink, I am your pen. Love is thought. Love is brain. With a sagacious brain we can fly to our goal without any pain. In love, You are my blood, I am your vein. ========================

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/18/2016 7:59:00 AM

Good morning, Manmath, a lovely inspirational read. A beautiful delight to read this morning. ((ps... Thank you for your comment, this is truly the first poem I'm dedicating myself to, that doesn't belong to a new poet or my contest. I haven't forgotten those who have given me so much support. I just haven't had the inspiration to enjoy this site as I use to before. However, I am going to pay more attention to those I enjoy.)) Sending hugs... Linda

Funom Makama

Date: 5/5/2016 1:12:00 PM

This is is fine piece with soul-reaching quality. I love this so much

Funom Makama

Date: 5/2/2016 1:26:00 PM

This is awesome... Thank you so much for this wonderful share

Gary Bateman

Date: 5/1/2016 5:55:00 PM

Hello Manmath . . . I see that you're brand new to Poetry Soup. A most humble welcome from me!! Thanks, by the way, for commenting on my recent couplet poem entitled: "Our Human Nature." You Imagism poem is so beautifully rendered. A "7" + A Big Fav for sure from me. Outstanding Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/27/2016 10:57:00 PM

Profound analogies about what love is, and you picked the most intense one for last: "You are my blood, I am your vein." You expressed yourself very well here with a poem that was easy to connect with. Good work!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/27/2016 2:52:00 AM

I love this poem Manmath, especially the way you ended it. Gave me chills! Beautiful! #7 ; )

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/26/2016 1:40:00 PM

You defined love deeply and beautifully ..Awesome.>>Charma.

Matthew Anish

Date: 4/25/2016 9:32:00 PM

You have some very nice metaphors in this work. Take a look a my work and let me know what you think! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Moon Flower

Date: 4/25/2016 3:48:00 AM

Congrats on your placement, Manmath.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/24/2016 8:20:00 PM

Love is all you have said and more! Great write!

Vladislav Raven

Date: 4/22/2016 10:10:00 AM

Hi Manmath, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Enjoyed the read....Mike.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/22/2016 4:53:00 AM

Wonderful imagery n win.. big congrats Manmath..

Joseph May

Date: 4/21/2016 10:09:00 PM

Congrats on your win ...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/21/2016 8:45:00 PM

this is a precious song of love, Manmath! and a big congrats in the contest.

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/21/2016 10:20:00 AM

Back to congratulate you, Manmath, for your fine win in the 'golden oldies' contest. Beautifully written! Sandra

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/21/2016 9:56:00 AM

Congratulation my lovely friend on your beautiful win. Loved always, bl

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/19/2016 4:22:00 PM

AN IMAGE FEAST OF LOVE AND ITS POSITIVE ATTRIBUTES MY FRIEND. Very well written and a pleasure to read.. A7

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/19/2016 10:19:00 AM

Beautiful poem enjoyed from you my lovely friend. Nice poem on imagism. You are my blood I am your vein, loved much. Loved always , bl

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/19/2016 7:20:00 AM

A lovely description!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2016 6:44:00 PM

Manmath, a beautiful and lovely poem. Love flourish ever so beautiful on here. I'm happy to see a new one from you again. Luv Linda

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/18/2016 5:25:00 PM

Very creative, Manmath, and full of imagery and metaphors in presenting the true meaning of love. I enjoyed your poem very much. Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2016 2:53:00 PM

great mataphors. Creative thinking!

Judy Gaines

Date: 4/18/2016 7:21:00 AM

Enjoyed reading every word.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/17/2016 4:28:00 PM

how wonderful is your kind of love so finely done, manmath.. huggs

Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/18/2016 9:54:00 PM

Thanks a lot........Nette.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/17/2016 3:34:00 PM

- A wonderful description of love, Manmath - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/18/2016 9:53:00 PM

Thanks a lot........Anne.