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"And death shall have no dominion" 

-Dylan Thomas

In life they take and take, dignity, peace. In life they trick us into nothing. Lower than soil; deeper than roots; sunk in swamps. In death we live, find paths past moon and stars. In life they destroy thoughts; desecrate bodies inside out; remove friendship; weapon spouses; alienate our children. They plough fields of fear; sow four seeds: shame, guilt, doubt and confusion; reap submission and self-harm. Their scythes we turn against ourselves. They grow... and grow. In death we wash our clothes in water clear they will be new In life our chains are made by man; their hands obscure us from the light; their hands rob us of food to feed, of clothes to cover; their hands make us shiver naked, invade and take.... and take. with fingers spread we wash our skin free of sin we give forgiveness In life we do not understand ourselves; dive head first into seas and mud; believe we are evil sinners. Puppets for far too long. Our deaths their win face them alive and be complete In life their winter will come soon, their blood will freeze, their organs crumble, their minds will scatter, food for birds, their shattered conscience preserved; they will do penance, time and again and again We shall sit with our backs against the tree eat the permitted fruit and be free *** Copyright © Darren White January 8, 2017

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Date: 7/18/2018 2:52:00 AM
dive head first into seas and mud----i like your analogy
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Date: 2/6/2018 8:51:00 PM
Life to struggle and Death is unknown. Our life long query going on. So nicely composed.
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Date: 1/30/2018 5:25:00 PM
Hello Darren, as I was reading this poem I realized that your poem spoke the truth. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 1/23/2018 3:45:00 PM
I wish there was some way of changing them in life. You have encompassed the dreams and hopes of all the poor and down trodden so well.
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Date: 1/9/2018 6:14:00 PM
A thoughtful poem and I like the way it shifts from one stanza to the next in a different style - very cool! :) <3
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Darren White
Date: 1/12/2018 12:47:00 PM
Thanks my friend, hugs :)
Date: 1/9/2018 2:21:00 PM
I like the tone, and depth of every line. Darren. Good to be reading again. Linda
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Darren White
Date: 1/12/2018 12:47:00 PM
So good to see you again, Linda!
Date: 1/9/2018 12:29:00 PM
Such a beautiful write on death and what awaits us. I love the shape this forms, almost like a ladder of sorts up to heaven :) Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 1/9/2018 9:12:00 AM
Brilliant poem, Darren, hope you are better, wishing you good health in this new year!!
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Darren White
Date: 1/12/2018 12:46:00 PM
Thanks so much Jo, slowly coming back here :)
Date: 1/8/2018 9:32:00 PM
Amazing my friend
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Darren White
Date: 1/9/2018 5:02:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend <3
Date: 1/8/2018 2:19:00 PM
"Do not go gently into that dark night " Darren.
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Darren White
Date: 1/9/2018 5:01:00 AM
Gentle, nowai! I follow Dylan Thomas everywhere :)
Date: 1/8/2018 10:01:00 AM
What a poem...Well done. I found to be very captivating... All the best Darren
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Darren White
Date: 1/8/2018 11:41:00 AM
Arturo, Thank you for the compliment!, and all the best to you too.
Date: 1/8/2018 9:40:00 AM
Phenomenal pen Darren! Pat your muse on the back for me for this one, word perfect excellence. Fave sweet P <3 muchos mo hugs!
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Darren White
Date: 1/8/2018 11:42:00 AM
Ma mo, thank you, also for the fav :) And loads of higs for you too.

Book: Shattered Sighs